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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person steve
schedule December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
thank you for haveing ron say he sorry, are you going to write ron talk with hermoine, is there anyway they could get back togther, or at least be friends.
person dominique1
schedule December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love the match in how braiden want his mama . star i have two of my sons living with me my 21 year old in my 23 year old its because of the economical system today unless your rich or have a high paying job its hard to live on your own besides their a lot of cultural people that have the whole family living with them i myself two uncles, my new-pew as well as my husband an sons love this chapter hope harry gets with draco's babies this time
person S.S.-B.
schedule December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Staaaaaar xD
You let us going crazy on facebook about the decuplets and now it's really a joke -.-
YOU ARE EVIL! xD
But it was a very good chapter ^^
schedule December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aw man, is he going to have ten babies or were you just pulling our legs!?! I hope he has ten babies, it'd be another interesting point in the story~!
Loved the chapter, Braiden was acting more adorable in this chapter~!
person K
schedule December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think men cry as much as women and I don't find it girly. I found it girly is where and what he cried over. Public humiliation? He has suffered much worse than that without a tear in his eye because it really isn't something he would cry about, this is Harry, he's a strong character, crying over people laughing seems very small and petty which it is and a stained shirt. He cries over people's deaths over what he think it's his fault but public humiliation? Harry? No, he's gone through much worse to cry over something as small and miniscule as public humiliation if he ever did face such public humiliation he'd get angry which usually happens. So it makes me cringe when he cried over it.

Draco has been a Slytherin player and from first year since he rode his first broom with Neville's remeberall, Harry had admitted that he was a really good flyer so how and why Blaise got picked as a quidditch captain is beyond me. Even J K Rowling has admitted that. But I guess I shouldn't have been surprised the fic has always been biased to Blaise anyway. And I've seen other reviews realising that too.

Love this chapter but even if you're the writer, please don't be blind to your own character flaws.
person Andrea Readwolf
schedule December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ha! That's a great way to tease and torment your FB followers. ^_^ Loved seeing Harry back in the air, and I agree--it would be lovely to see him flying with his own wings. Looking forward to Harry's next heat--although I know he's not too enthused about it. I think it would be interesting to see how the rest of the family handles it. And I'm looking forward to Malfoy twins--can't remember if you said how many for sure Harry's next clutch would be, but I still have a lovely image of of two darling strawberry-blondes, more blonde then ginger, a real prince and princess of the Malfoy family. They'd be regal little hellions, too! Ha!
Thank you for keeping on with this delightful story. I understand RL has been dealing you some real challenge cards. I appreciate you being able to find the time and the inspiration to continue this story, especially since I've learned to love the extended cast dearly so (not that you made it difficult at all to love them all!).
person Hannah
schedule December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!!! I don't mind having to wait longer, so long as you keep writing as marvellously as you do!!
person Jeda_Lovegood
schedule December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*sighhh* I tried soooo hard not to read it thru too quickly but I cudnt help myself. I love this storyy sooooooo much. I'm usually not one for a long story but I said ill take a chance and I'm glad I did. There is never a boring chapter. Everything is just simply perfect in my opinion. All the ups&downs and the drama. Oh an I love Nasta. *teehee*. You really are an excellent writer. I'm seriously captured by this story. I'm gonna check out ur othr works while I wait for another update. Hope life's treating you well!

Jeda :)
schedule December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lol drunken harry is hilarious! And blaize forgot how to speak english >_< I love this story I can't wait until the next update. I want to see harry in his new outfits!
person Nene
schedule December 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing chapter. I love this story.