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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person DustyTears
schedule December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my flying muffin fleece jesus pants. Your story is sooo amazing!!! I get so many . . . . feelings reading this I just can't even begin to tell you how many praises I have for you! It's sexy, sweet, adorable, orgasmic, fantastic, mystical, oh and did I say sexy? Cause it is super sexy approved! I love your story so much I actually reviewed which I haven't felt the need to do for any story in a long time! I hope you have an awesome christmas!!!! Live Long And Prosper!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Patricia
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I'm sick and I just read chapters 63 and 64 and reading them made me feel better than my medication. I laughed, drooled, and laughed some more. I don't like Smith either. I wish you an early happy Yule, or Merry Christmas, or whatever your religious holiday is. I would be so happy if you updated before Christmas but I in no way wish to rush you or even make you feel rushed. Take care as well. Blessed be.
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'll be honest, this review has nothing to do with the new chapter, sorry. I was rereading some of the chapters and noticed you talked about marraige a few time and I was wondering if same sex marraige was legal in all of Britin as it was sorta implyed in the chapter Madness in the supermaket scene or if that is just going to be a Wizarding world only thing? I know here in the US it really depends on what state you live in, but I'm unfamiliar with British politics.

I did like the new chapter (Go Harry!) and can't wait for the next update.

Have a good holiday
person S
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is really good and well written. Normally, I quit reading stories once we start hitting the 20ish or so chapter. This story just kept me captive and I'm still looking forward to the next chapter.
Keep up the good work!
schedule December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, that was stupid that hostess slut. considering who har and his lovers are, all they need to do is mention how very bad the service etc was and that place will be pretty much black listed. i'd be upset to if some whorish bint was both hitting on my man and dumping wine on me.
the drunken sex orgy thing was hilarious. I hope they didn't do themselves to much damage. >> still, no one can say they didn't enjoy their night out. ^^ what they remember of it. :P
interesting, i wonder if the boys will take them up on the suck up freebie meal.

bout time someone out side the family circle got to met the kids.

i wonder what had har so green for the game? still, they one so 'go, go, gryffindor!' ;p
person richon
schedule December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love your story , can't stop thinking about what happen to harry ?? will he be pregnate soon?? craving for more ... see you soon
person Kit
schedule December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I took me almost four days to read the whole thing and catch up. This story has sucked me in and I can't wait to read more. It has also inspired me to finally work on my fanfic that has been sitting on the shelf for over three years now. I am loving all your characters as well, I think Nasta has got to be one of my favorites. I was so excited when I got to the chapter when Harry chose him as a mate. And that he is top dominant makes me giggle like the fangirl I am.
person Dani
schedule December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I honestly don't know how you wrote all 64 of these chapters in just a year and a half! I absolutely adore this story and I'm sorry for only reviewing once I finished reading it all but I couldn't stop myself from clicking the next chapter button. I think it's taken me 2 weeks to get through it all, what with final exams and such, but it has been worth every second.
I think Nasta is my favorite character because he's so silent and strong and protective and takes such good care of his mates as top dominant. I'm also really enjoying seeing Draco come out of his shell and I can't imagine how he'll be when he has some biological children of his own. I'm hoping for a blond-hair, green-eyed beauty and I wouldn't be opposed to it being a little girl with a really sweet name.
person Jan
schedule December 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Gods, I just love Ginny & Harry together, they are hilarious, and sarcastic, their brilliant!

Please update chapter 65 soon.
person grim1989
schedule December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yea, I didn't like Smith either xD
but I'm curious of what is wrong with Harry, so I can't wait to see next chapter.