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Ah, new chapter. Such a great Christmas present! Merry Christmas!

Was that a nod to the fourth Potter film at the beginning of the chapter? The long haircuts really did look awful in that movie, heh.

AHH. We finally got to see Harry use his fetish clothes but it didn't work out at all! Aw. I have to say that I did enjoy the drama though. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how it's resolved. Hopefully we get to see Harry dress up more successfully later on? :P

I loved the Harry/Draco bath time at the beginning too. So sweet.

Still one of my favourite fics of all time. Can't wait for the next update whenever that will be. :)

poor harry wanted a night of sex only for max to fuck it up but they did need a real fight since they never got one so good like always want more

Dang they can never catch a break! Great chapter. Love Harry in drag.

well damn, how to totally kill the mood AND piss har off. well done lads. *sneers. its a good thing har has decent control or he could have shredded them both.

I love this story so much and I wish you luck in writing it! I normally do not like "baby" fics but I love this... Also if you can send a real life version of Nasta to me for Christmas that would be amazing.

Aaaaaand I'm up to date. It's a shame I'll now have to wait for new chapters like others have had to do for a while, but I still have to read the Scaled Bits so that should keep me entertained for a while. I'm really looking forward to what happens after Hogwarts, especially what Harry is going to do. Keeping the house would seem the most reasonable, but it sounds a tad dull. Duller than an auror or a professional Quidditch player, at least.

Speaking of Quidditch; there's this really small detail. If I remember correctly, the players are already in the air before the match starts, hovering in a big circle. The match then starts when the balls are released. I'd need to check the books to be 100% sure about this and it's not really a big deal, but at least now I've said it!

Merry Christmas!

Its stories like this that remind me why I love this site. Its totally worth all the trouble I go threw with my phone to read ever single chapter. Keep up the good work and take care of your self. I wish all writers could write as well as you and were able to take our fav characters and reinvent them but still keep their main personality alive like you do.

As a straight guy who's never read any fan fiction before, your story was quite a discovery. I started reading Harry Potter when I was 6 and so many years later is awesome to disover so many more stories based on a series I already know and love. I can't say I was too excited about the rather gay pairings at first, but the way you write has someone enabled me to enjoy it despite my own sexual preferences. Having read 40 chapters in 2 days, I can hardly deny I quite enjoy your story...

I originally wanted to read all of the story thus far, but I just wanted wanted to express my enthusiasm already! There have been a couple of pet peeves, however, which I'd like to point out as well. Of course I don't expect you to fully agree with me, but that's what reviews are for, right? :)

Obviously there are the occasional typo's that are bound to occur when writing this much, but if I ever get to a second read-through, I'll make sure to make a small list of them. If you don't mind a Dutchy correcting you in your native language, that is! My English is not flawless either, after all.

Something that has bothered me story wise were the changes to a male submissive's body: with everything going on, I honestly wouldn't have minded if you'd cramped in a basic set of female reproductive organs as well. It would just have made a little bit more sense than backdoor impregnation, at least to me. Saying all wizards could get pregnant pretty mich fixed this, but at the same time it felt a little bit like an excuse to have Harry openly be pregnant. The open mindedness regarding homosexuality and having multiple sexual partners required some getting used to (while I share the basic live and live principle, it's not really standard in our muggle society), but I suppose it allowed for more interesting story telling than having everyone hide in the cupboard all the time,

One last point of critique: I honestly don't understand the bottle feeding. Men are more than capable of producing milk when given the right hormones, so Drackens releasing those hormones during pregnancy and shortly after would have seemed more logical to me. (This somehow stuck with me after you wrote in a note that Harry wouldn't grow boobies. /Disappointment)

Overall: I realise countless of people have probably said this already, but please keep writing stuff! Thanks for introducing me to fanfiction, I'm sure I'll find some great stories to waste my time on. I mean; it's half past 2 AM and I'm writing this piece of prose, for crying out loud... Even Rowling herself never got me to do that.

Gah. I have so much love for this fic, it's incredible. :D

Lots of fluffiness in this chapter - loved it. And Braiden's relationship with Harry: awww.
And I can't wait for Harry to use his outfits on his Mates soon.
I just wanted to say really quickly that whether you get the chance to update before Christmas or not, your updates are always great. Nice and long and always interesting. I can't see this story getting stagnant any time soon.

A really great birthdaygift for me, thank you very much! Its great and I hope you can post a new chapter before christmas, that would be so good, but don't get in any trouble over this...

Love you and your story!
Greetings from germany!