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LOVE THE FAN ART BUT I THINK HIS NECK NEEDS TO BE A LITTLE SHORTER (sorry my caps lock was on and im lazy) love this story by the way it is realy good i keep meaning to review but i forget the only time i rememberd was on the chapter before you reveald sev's mate to be RAB i just get so wraped up in reading i have to go to the next chapter asap so i can find out what happens next

Needless to say, I have finally finished all 65 chapters that were up when I started. I love it so far and can't wait to read more.

Thank you for continuing to update! I'm really enjoying it! Of course Harry's life would continue to have drama after the Voldie has been defeated. I enjoy your writing style, and the balance of family time/relationship development, Dracken details, and dramatic events. If you keep writing like this, I'll probably keep reading! I can't imagine Harry being happy if he has more kids before the others turn 3- can you imagine more than 6 kids under 3? I'd check myself into a mental institution for peace and quiet. I'm curious to see if you'll give Harry at least a part time job- maybe even volunteering his time sometimes- and see how all their Draken sides deal with it. I'm also wondering how long Aneirin will stay mad at Nasta. And maybe Harry can lead a cultural revolution in the Draken society with reforms for submissive behavior, dominant-submissive interaction, and submissive-child interaction. Well, I look forward to more! Thank you!

I just finished chapter 46. I almost woke my daughter up when I shouted 'wtf'... Thank you very much for that. I'm just kidding. Going back to reading now.

Ooh!!! I can't wait for ch. 66! I love how your story is coming along! My story is being kinda hard to write right now...

idk if im right and i know u have probly already wrote it in later chapters but i just have to guess is Rrgulus arcturus black severous's mate? (sorry about my spelling i know it sux)

Okay, just finished Ch. 29, not giving input, just wanted to applaud you -pushes a button and what sounds like a stadium claps for you- not just for your wonderful story, but also for the take-down of that... -cough insert bad word here cough- reader. Obviously not paying attention. I once devoured a 35 chapter fic in less time than those 29 chapters took me, but I also stayed up for well over 30 hours to do it, so I apologize, it will take me two or three days to catch up. I also wanted to ask you to kindly accept my FB friend request as I have a writer-to-writer request that sounds confusing even in my head. Take your time, I'm going to plan with my original idea until I hear from you. But I really hope you are receptive to my idea, or that the original creator of the idea is... That sounded confusing. I apologize. I give you 5 STARS!!!!!!!!
Just so you know that I'm in love with your story and that I hope my own story earns the same approval from others that yours has earned from me, even if I'm not great at writing smut... Thank you for reading my ramblings. I'm kinda tired, but I can't... stop... reading!!!!

-looks around guiltily- I did not, did not under any circumstances have a spaz attack when I read that Fred and George were there...... It's 3am here and I just finished ch. 33... Hehe, 3 am, ch. 33... Sorry, I get weird the later it gets. Had to say that I'm in love with this story, again... And be weird I guess... GOOD NIGHT!!!

It pains me to find out that I cannot 'subscribe' to this story. I suppose I'll just have to check every day? How often do you usually update?

I have read the entire story thus far, I just thought it prudent to backtrack and attempt to post a review for each chapter.

Let's start by saying that this story is so amazing. It's odd, I came here, looking for a bit of romance/porn to get a little flustered, and I randomly clicked on the first link I came across. It happened to be your story. I became so engrossed in it, I've done nothing but read it for nearly 4 days. I cried, I laughed, I got giddy and flustered. I cannot express how amazing this story is! Not to mention there are very few grammar and spelling mistakes, and you are an excellent writer, with an amazing imagination!

I will, eventually, review each and every chapter, but that will require another readthrough! Haha So from here on out, I'll pretend I haven't read any of it, and that I do not know what will happen. By the way, I hope you like long reviews.
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Hi there! Love your story so far! I love the idea of Drakens, and I feel like I've heard it before, or perhaps you just put so much life and thought into their story that I feel they MUST be real. I'll be honest, I felt the first chapter was kind of off. You did say it was adopted, so I assume pieces of it, if not the whole thing, were also adopted.

I do love the mystery when Harry doesn't realize there are more Drakens at Hogwarts! Then there's Snape, being kind of (who are we kidding, REALLY) creepy, as always. I'm hope this doesn't turn out to be a sev/harry fic, because, while I love Snape, I feel he should be a mentor/father/brother someone to protect and care for Harry, not sleep with him. Ew.

BUT OH MY! WHAT A CLIFF HANGER! I wonder who the strange man is that Harry met! Obviously a Draken of some sort! I hope he's there to help our little Harry! I cannot WAIT for the next chapter. (So I guess it's a good thing it's fully updated to chapter 65!)

Great story!
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Also, I apologize for my... how do I put it.. craziness? On the bright side, you get more reviews. On the down side, it's just me rambling on and being dumb.

Til next chapter!

Kupo

Ok, so this is a bit embarrasing, so please don't mock me for it. This story has meant a lot to me. I was pregnant when I 1st started reading it, and as circumstance would have it, had a pregnancy very similar to Harry's. Right when he nearly had a miscarriage, so did I. It was terrifying, and I read your story to get away from it all and have someone to sympathize with since my mother is not a part of my life. My baby was much more of a handful then Harry's, but of course I've only got 1 man helping me out! Thank you for being such an intense writer.