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Chapter three

Finally he gets to go public with Blaise! I wonder how many mates he will have, and who was the mysterious draken who saved him!

Also, that douchey dracken is a super douche.

Hahaha

To the next chapter!

Kupo

Chapter five. (I mislabeled my last review. Oops.)

Hmmm what is Snape going to teach Harry? I wonder, I wonder. And what's the deal wth Draco? He's totally being weird.

Harry seems to be running from aggressive drackens a lot.

To the next one!

Kupo

Chapter two:

I kind of thought that Blaise would be the draken. Either Blaise or Draco. They seem the most likely. Also, the way Harry is defiant, yet submissive is going to make for some AMAZING drama in later chapters. Sorry these reviews are short, I'm doing them from my phone.

I wonder how many mates Harry will need to conceive? Will Draco tell everyone about Blaise and Harry?

With the does family ever notice her gone?

Tune in next time, for RISE OF THE DRAKENS!

Trollol.

Kupo

Chapter three:

Oh man drama drama. Blaise is just finding out how hard headed Harry can be. What will he do with his little submissive.

Oh my, what does Snape know? Hmmm everything. Perchance he could be a dracken himself?

Also I wonder how the meeting will turn out. Many brilliant duels to the death! A giant rape fear? Who knows?

Kupo

I love the story line and this chapter actually shows me harry's dominant side. I canot wait for you to update. I think max needs a spanking from his dad and so does nasta. They really screwed up this time. Can you give me an estimate when your goung to update? I ask so i can hold myself from nagging lol:)

Phew, I've just read all 65 chapters in 2 days with very few breaks in between - and I loved them all! I'm sad that there aren't more chapters, but I totally understand having a life outside of writing, so I will wait with due patience (and excitement, not gonna lie) until the next post :)

I don't feel too sad though, as I haven't read The Scaled Bits yet - I'm going to do that now! But I just had to review and let you know how amazing this story is and how much I love everything about it: Nasta and Max, the Drackens, Max's family, Nasta's family, Blaise's mum, Draco's hair fetish, all the darling babies I want to cuddle and coo at despite their dirty nappies, Harry's strength, and the protectiveness they all share :) Can't wait for the next update, I'll be looking out for it!

Hopefully this isn't a creepy sign-off for a first reviewer, but I feel I can say honestly: with lots of love,

HS

Hi,
at first, i want to apologize for any language or gramar mistakes that i

Hi :) First off I love this story, I really do but I keep wondering about laws. In the story Harry is considered an adult when he is with his mates but not in real life, there are lots of fanfiction that have a younger harry with an older partner but is it allowed? It would make me feel a lot better if I knew. Thank you :)

Ok First can I see if I have some terminology correct?
Dummy = Pacifier
Nappy = Diper
Draw = Drawer
Right? I am sorry I must confess that I am only an American, yet I would love to have been Welsh or just plain Brittish, But alas, A Womans Dreams Just Remain Dreams.
Ok Now I can gush about how amazing of a writer you are, and how you just perfectly create the scene of whatever is happening in your readers mind. I have NEVER read such a brilliantly worded... Actually more like Crafted... Piece of Literature.
Never in my life Have I read somethimg so amazing as this extrodinary gift you have givin us.
And I have 23 full years of non-stop reading to compare it to I might add.
Take as long as you need Love. Update When its Convientant for YOU. Not us, the carnivorous readers.
I will say though that I will await that day with want and Anticipation... As one does not just simply read A Fanfiction as great as this... One Devours it. As It takes over ones thoughts and dreams. Hell Last night I had a nightmare that I had Eight children at one go...
I killed my Four mates (heh. I wish. Right now I'm stuck with my one amazing Boyfriend) Two of wich were Dominant Females (I cannot help my sexual prefrances ;) ) And The Babies killed me. Seven Out Of Eight of them were girls. five Were Drackens.
Weird.
So I must just say how much I love this...


Oh... And One more thing






HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!

I couldnt help myself xD

just so you know ice cold peppermint schnapps (my preferance as a baby but my mom also used wiskey so id immagine that any liquar would work) is great for teathing just stick a bottle in the freezer and when it is cold dip a q tip in it and rub the q tip on the babys gumms it also has less alcohol content than the baby teathing gell if you use enough for it to actualy work that is