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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Kupo
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter seven

Ahhhhh the smut, finally. Oh my I do declare! That made me got and bothered! Lol

Could you really imagine ten straight days of sex? Holy cow, I get tired after a few hours. Hahaha

Soon we shall see Harry's second mate! I hope it's an older guy (as if I didn't already know)

Kupo
person Kupo
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter eight

A filler chapter, a short chapter, but still awesome

Have I complimented your writing yet? If I haven't, woe is me. You're writing is fantastic, with enough detail to keep us interested and informed, but not so much that we are drowning in a sea of words.

Kupo
person Kupo
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter nine

DUN DUN DUN!!!! Aaaand it's Draco. I knew it was coming (though I didn't the first time I read it haha)

Brilliant smut scene, very enjoyable from a third party.

I wonder what it would be like if he chose a female Dom? Would she still carry the chicks?

I shall read more tomorrow!

Kupo
person Kupo
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter ten

Ok ok I know I said tomorrow, but now I can't stop reading. Damn, I need to sleep!

I was really hoping he'd choose nasta at this point, but what can ya do?

Dominic is going to get his gruesome death and I can't wait (to read it again)

Maybe sleep now?

Kupo
person Kupo
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter eleven

Well, no sleep yet haha!

My oh my, that torture scene made my stomach roll. Good job!

Also, THAT IS A LOT OF SPANKS! Holy cow, I couldn't imagine how bad that would be.

Kupo
person Kupo
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter twelve

Good god why can't I put my phone down and go to bed?

I blame you and this fantastic story.

When I was reading this the first time, I was so angry that nasta kept not getting chosen. At one point I yelled at my phone "I WILL FILLET YOU ALIVE!"

Haha. He's so nice and knowledgable and kind.

I hope Draco learns his lesson good and proper! (Even though I know he does)

Kupo
person Kupo
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter thirteen.

I'm now blaming your amazing talent with cliffhanger for my lack of sleep now.

Oh no! He can't reject Draco! (Though the first time I read it I was like "good, make room for nasta!"

Ok I'm putting the phone down now and going to bed...

Kupo
person Kupo
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter fourteen

Well, I didn't put my phone down and go to sleep. Shame on me. In my defense, I knew there was a smut scene coming. Lol

Now Harry's drackens better accept Draco! He's a changed man! ... Boy? Dracken?

Ok bed this time, I swear it!

Kupo
person Kupo
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter... Fifteen?

Finally a quiditch scene! I had thought you had forgotten Harry has that. Haha

Oh my, he's been hurt, the drackens will not like that. And I love how nasta snuck in to watch. You can tell already how much he cares.

Kupo
person rhia
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much the great writing im a huge fan of your fics