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Chapter fifty I forgot

Wowowowow what a sex scene! I also love the "quality" time he spent with Blaise.

Draco is certainly getting better at taking cock! Lol

Also, I really hope Amelle is a changed woman. Or changing woman. Either way.

Kupo

Chapter fifty seven

An amazing chapter, as always. Hopefully now Severus can get some closure.

Also public sex scene from the doms pov, amazing!!

Kupo

Chapter fifty eight

I'm nearly caught up!

Wow that's some rough sex. At least Harry enjoyed it! Lol

Perchance one more chapter before work.

Kupo

Chapter thirty nine

Aaaaaand here's Remus! I was wondering when he would sneak his way into the fic! Hahah

And the birth has begun! I was going to stop here, but I have to read the birthing chapter.

And away we go!

Kupo

Chapter fourty

Yay! Blaise has a baby boy but the poor dear doesn't even know it yet.

He will know soon enough! And omg I was giggling so bad with the end scene, especially Draco.

Aaah good times.

Kupo

Chapter fourty one

Getting closer to being caught up now!

Blaise's beautiful baby has a beautiful name, and there was a lot of smut in this chapter, an Amit is ALWAYS appreciated.

Poor Harry. He needs to be get laid. Lol

And uh oh! The Malfoys!

Ok bed time now. <3

Kupo

Chapter fourty two

Ok last one for read this time.

Loved the scene with Harry and Lucius, though I feel Lucius got off very light for hitting Harry.

Well I'm off to bed now!

Kupo

Chapter fourty four? I think

I lied.

Amazing chapter, I was laughing so hard during the fight when that girl was like "cut out her bitchy tongue!"

Also, the scene at the end with the "my meat". Hilarious.

Kupo

Someone recommended this fic and I decided to have a look. So I read the first few chapters, just to see if I liked it... as in, the first 65 chapters... :P
The story is a pretty fascinating mixture of Harry's childhood trauma, sex, and babies. I don't think I've ever read a story that made me both want and dread children so much. If your own pregnancy(-ies) was/were anything like you describe, I pity you for the extreme morning sickiness. On the other hand, the ḱids seem so happy most of the time, I just want to keep at least one of them for myself. ;D
The sex also surprised me. Usually, I'm all in favor of threesomes/moresomes. It's good fun. And for the most part, I immensely enjoyed reading the scenes here. But some of them actually didn't appeal to me, were too rough, too primal, and not even truly remembered by any of the people involved afterwards. That just seems... wrong, somehow.
Still, it really doesn't make me want to stop reading. *g*
I had trouble with a couple of concepts. a) I don't think they ever went to that parenting class, despite everyone agreeing that it would be a good idea, first and foremost to calm Harry's nerves. b) This might be just me getting lost in translation: What's so bad about 'biological' washing powder? c) At first, I thought the 'platform bed' was just that: an elevated bed. But when things fell over the side and could be picked up by a person lying on the bed, I had my doubts. It took me a while to figure out that apparently, a lot more than just the bed fits on that platform. Hum, maybe I just skipped a line in the description or something.
Regardless of those small problems I had with the logic and logistics, I enjoyed reading this a lot and am looking forward to furher updates. :)
- Dime

Chapter fourty something

I forgot to review this chapter after I read it last night lol.

I love the teasing and love the smut.

Harry's mates reactions were priceless lol

Kupo