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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Anon
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter sixty four

One more to go til I'm caught up.

Excellent game, excellent everything. You are amazing

Kupo
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter sixty five

amazing, as always. How terrible that they would fight and a baby could have been there. They will surely be in the dog house.

I very eagerly await a new chapter from you, as this story has wormed its way deep into my heart. You have such a talent for writing, and such an imagination that you pull your readers right along with you into the world you have created.

Never doubt your skills as an author, because frankly, they are undoubted.

Eagerly awaiting your update,

Kupo
person Jade
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okaii, I Just Thought Of This, And Its Been Bugging My Mind, You Answered To Someone Else's Question That If The Submisive Dies Then If The Dominants Love Each (Such As In Harry's Case) They'll Stay Together. Doesnt Every Dracken Relationship Need A Submissive To Function? What Would Happen? Like, Would Blaise Take On A Submissive Role Since Hes The Least Dominant Or Would They All Pursue A New Submissive Together And He/She Would Have To Accept All Of Them Or None Of Them?? Like What Would Happen ?? :/
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter forty nine

Doing this review on the computer haha.

It's nice that they're back at the castle, Harry's first "home". I can't wait for them to truly realize what Harry has actually been through his entire life.

They will post humorously freak the fuck out. xD

To the next chapter! I can read til I pass out. lol

Kupo
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter fifty

Ew Ew Ew. Those food cravings made my stomach roll.

Also, poor Harry with five babes. He's so small. >.<

Also, if I were Harry at this point I would have dropped out of school and just got my GED. Do wizards have an equivalent of a GED? Lol

Kupo
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter fifty one (or two) there are too many chapter! But yet, not enough. Lol

This chapter made me cry like the whole time. Poor Harry. I would have snapped user the pressure long before then.

You hav an amazing talent and I just want to be sure you know that.

Kupo

Also, my captcha is spray cock, lmao
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter fifty something

So Myron's preferred punishment is spanking? I thought it was timeout. Haha

Love the little bit with Snape, I loved even more the retelling of Harry's first year.

Kupo
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter fifty three

And they are born! Good job Harry to get them all alive and breathing!

His poor mates.

Have to read the next chapter NOW!

Kupo
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter fifty four

I like how when it was just Blaise an Harry, Blaise said Harry will not have a harem of men! But now that's what they call themselves.

Tee hee

Great chapter, as always.
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter I forgot to look again

Finally they all have names! I wonder which one is the dracken!

How sad about Harry's "room". And him teasing max like that. Tsk tsk

Kupo