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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Anon
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
happy birthday!
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dear Star,

Happy Early Birthday to you Happy Early Birthday to you, Happy Early Birthday to YOou Happy Birthday to You!

Thanks for a wonderful chapter! I started off reading on FF.net and am now closely following your Facebook for updates. you are an amazing author and the world you have created is A.Mazing. i hope that you have a great birthday weekend!

Sincerely,
~A.
person ladilyn
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Enjoy your holiday and birthday! Tell those complaining about updates that if they'd just go ahead and write their own stories the time between updates would pass so much quicker. I love this story and would love to see a new update every month, er, week, um, hour, okay as soon as I finished reading the chapter. However, I'm grateful for the time you are giving to write this story and am happy whenever a new chapter to this or Scaled Bits comes out. It always makes my day.

Now, to the story. I so enjoyed how Harry reacted to all that was happening, particularly the not really wanting to go home and deal with thing. I also liked how Blaise stood up to the others regarding the cot and told them off. Blaise and Nasta vie for being my favorite dominant as they both understand Harry in ways the other two do not and consider Harry and what he feels/wants while Max and Draco are still too caught up in themselves, still to spoiled yet, though Draco seems to be getting better.

Thanks for all of your time and effort and enjoy your time off and HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
person unicorn53
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I myself look forward to each installment of this wonderful story. It does not matter when it arrives just as long as I get to read it when it comes out. Life and work take a lot out of us and sometimes have to come first before we can relax and enjoy the fun parts like writing, drawing and such things. I have several hundred stories I read on different fanfiction sites. I look forward to each and everyone of them and I don't complain when it takes a while before the next chapter comes up. So those out there who gripe and whine, get a life of your own and a hobby. Give this wonderful writer a break and cheer them on not yell at them for taking part in their own life. Please author keep up the great work and catch you next time for chapter 67!!! :)))))
person Wolfmistress
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Early Happy Birthday.

Please ignore the reviewers that are ignorant to the life of a fanfiction writer. At least you do update rather regularly, I have had to wait years sometimes for a writer to update at times. I do not, and probably will never, have a Facebook account, so the only reason I would ask at any time would be out of concern (one writer passed before she could finish her stories and they were taken down without warning or notice by family). You do have a life beyond writing and should take advantage of it.

I enjoyed this chapter. The doms are all going to have a major talking to by the parents and Albus for leaving certain aspects out about the fight, right? Afterall, the reason Harry became really angry was the destruction of the playpen where Braiden had been just one hour earlier.

Waiting patiently for the next installment.

Wolfmistress
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I very much enjoy this story and i look forward to reading more when you up date. this is the longest story i have read and your attention to detail is impressive and immaculate. theres a story here and not just a smut fest. granted i love a good smut fest as much as the next fan girl but this story is beautiful and engaging. i really am looking forward to the next update, i hope harry can forgive poor Max and Nasta soon!
person Chelsea
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted you to know that I throw a mini-party every time I check and see that there is a new chapter.
Seriously, there is a little dance involved.
I've read through the whole story at least three times and I'm constantly checking to see if there are updates.
This is, hands down, my favorite fanfiction ever. I love all your writing, but this is my favorite.
You do such a wonderful job.
person Madam Coffee Kitty
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful update! Sorry for the impatient, inconsiderate berks. You actually update very well considering how long the chapters are and all your other RL obligations. I was once reading a story where the author wrote wonderfully long chapters but they updated like once every 4 to 6 months. Now that was frustrating. But one never knows what is happening in the lives of others. I love this story and I hope you never lose your enjoyment of writing. Have a wonderful birthday and break from work!! I wish you good luck, good health, and happy writing!

P.S. Sorry I don't review more. I have been reading our story from your very first post, but I have only review maybe five times at most. Just know that this is one of my absolute favorite stories and you are a fantastic author!
person LeSerpent
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story. I am a huge fan of interesting polyamory fictions but I must say, this one is definitely one of my favourites. You have developed the characters in realistic and evolved ways that make them pop out of the page and I just can't stop reading until I put it down. I also love the insights into magical creature culture you insert quite naturally into the work, things only popping up when relavent instead of just slabs of information. Plus the babies are cute; normally babies creep me out so bravo, that is quite a feat.
I'm so sorry to hear people have been bothering you to write more or rushing you. As a writer myself I know how hard it is to force out work or to find time to write properly when you're living your own life. So as a fan and a writer, please do not let this story take over your life any more than you want it to. I would hate for you to end up resenting it because of the online pressure. Write when you can and when you want to, true fans will wait. I will admit to being excited for the next chapter, but hope you have a wonderful birthday and a great week off.
Thanks for making such an amazing story that you are willing to share with us all. I admire you a lot.
person Madam Coffee Kitty
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lol. I forgot to mention how much I love Braiden's development. I also love the other babies and I can't wait to read how you develop their characters. The ordeal with changing the "twins" outfits a few chapters ago had me cracking up! One hating to be naked, while the other hating clothes. So cute! Anyway, I enthusiastically await your next chapter.