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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Silentxxdreamer
schedule October 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ahhh! I have only just found this wonderful fic! I'm so happy to have found such a well developed story,  thank you!!

I can't even begin to describe how proud of you and pleased I am with the pacing of these chapters.

You've been able to give us readers twists and turns without leaving us feeling blindsided by a character's decision or opinion. And I am supremely impressed! 

I have laughed heartily and I have readily cried and I have been immensely angry. Thank you for writing such an expressive and captivating story!

I look forward to reading your A/N's and you and your family have my many sympathies for the hardships and loss you've experienced over the course of this fanfiction. I send much love your way!

I applaud your dedication and ability. 

With my any thanks, 

~Silentxxdreamer 

person Ecks
schedule October 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Normally I don't write reviews, but I just had to find my AFF login so that i could get on and tell you how much I love your story. I started it just a few days ago and it completely consumed my life! I am all caught up now and while I excitedly wait for the next chapter I will start reading The Scaled Bits.

Your characters are amazing. I am so attached to all of them, even the minor ones.

Like almost everyone else reviewing I am so looking forward to when Draco has a baby, not that he treats any of the kids as not his. I am hoping that Dracos child will be a dracken. I imagine his father will be a bit fussy about that, but I can see Harry reminding Lucius how many children drackens have so if his grandson is a dracken there would be plenty of Malfoys in the future!

Again I just wanted to thank you for your great story and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

person Brissygirl
schedule October 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Star I found a mistake if you want to fix it. I normally read on FFnet but I wanted to read the smexy times and since FFnet doesn't allow multiple reviews for the same chapter if you're signed in I figured here would be the next best option. :) Anyway it's this sentence;

Those blue eyes closed. “Yes.” Max moaned lingeringly, closing his eyes

How can Max close his eyes a second time if they are already closed? I'm not trying to be a smartass or anything just pointing out that you need to revise that sentence. Good Luck with your upcoming writing projects!

person Anonymous
schedule September 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

hi! 

I've Been reading for a while now,  taken me ages to finally finish what you've written, but I've really enjoyed it so far! I was wondering if you were still doing the email updates thing? If so, sign me up please! 

Rosie.linehan@outlook.com.au

schedule September 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM

The story is great as always. Is the next baby/ one of the babies going to be Drcao's? He the only one without a biological child.

person Viral
schedule September 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Yoooou sneakily went through and updated the old chapters! I've been rereading to celebrate Dracktember, and imagine my delight to find all those little snippets and details. The birthdays will be fun, too! 

Is there any way to request scenes for Scaled Bits? Because I would love to see Eva and Ave's meetings, especially if they end up doing them together as you've been hinting. That, and the final wedding at some point! <3 I love all the little details you find to add into this story, and to bring the characters to life. 

person Jan
schedule September 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This was sweet, it was nice to see that they are growing as a couple but also as parents, it's not easy to trust others with the well being of your children, please update chapter 108 soon.

person autumngold
schedule September 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Amazing update! Thank you for your wonderful new chapter! I'm glad that everything went well with the kids day away. It"s just too bad that the faeries are such jerks. It's no wonder that they don't have more young, when they treat their own so badly. Outstanding story! I can't even begin to tell you how much I've enjoyed reading your incredible story!
person Anonymous
schedule September 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for the chapter! I'm sad to hear the roll is over but hopefully inspiration will hit again soon!

person mary applegarth
schedule September 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm happy that thing are getting back to normal for the guys.  The sex scenes were HOT..  Please update soon.  I want to know what happens next.   I really like this story.