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Not sure if I liked the last chapter, to be honest. I really felt like Harry (and the others) was overreacting; yes, it was unthoughtful, but it didn't seem bad enough to instantly start questioning someone's entire mindset.
Either way; happy birthday! :)

Dear StarLight_Massacre,

I write not often reviews, because it is my opinion that a lame 'I really like this chapter' is not enough. But I have to say: "I really like this story!" Another reason is, in my opinion the author shouldn't be told how the events of a story should go on or how you dislike a certain development in a story. If I don't like a story I don't read it. I don't mind the waiting for another chapter, but I also can understand the desire to read the next chapter as soon as possible. Also I can understand that you are busy with your work and linving in general. So don't feel pressed to hurry up. I'm happy to read every now and than a new chapter and looking forward to the next.

sommermoon

(Sorry if there are mistakes in the telling or the grammer. I'm from Germany and English was not one of my best subjects in school.)

Hey!
A little word just to tell you that I got curious enough to start reading this story, and guess what? I was so caught up in it that I stayed up all night reading every chzpters you wrote! I think your plot is great and the way you are writting is amazing! I know you'll never write fast enough for me because I wish it could already be complete so that I could have an answer to the many questions I have over the future of the 'little' family! ;)
But don't worry, as you said, you are only 'human' so it is normal for you to take your time writing it! (and I know that if you take your time writing the story, it is only going to become more great! So really, don't worry about writing fast, as long as you don't put your story on hiatus, I won't stop reading it and encourage you...)

Anyway, what I really wanted to say is that your story is splandid, I love the characters you made up (Nasta is my favorite so far! hehe!) and I enjoy seeing Harry with a family of his own. I can't wait to see how you're going to make the Dursleys pay but I hope they'll suffer a lot! I also can't wait to see a baby draco and maybe a Lucius fussing all over his new grandson! It could be so very funny!

Thank you so much for posting this! I'll see you in another review! :D
P.S: forgive the bad english, it isn't my first language...

People should be nicer on how they request another chapter from the writer but it tells of the quality of the story that people are eager for more chapters. Your story is wonderful and I look forward to any chapters that are written. I think of them as a special surprise to my day when you have updated. Life is busy and complicated. Always take care of that first, so we may be entertained and the author does not go crazy. Thank you for writing and sharing your talents.

I must confess I was kinda impatient for the new chapter, but most of it comes from the cliffhanger at the end of the last chapter. I KNOW how stressing work can be. It usually takes at least 2 hours to recuperate, and then?
For me, it is sixish-sevenish before I've got energy again. I really envy you for being able to write that much while working :(

But enough of my ranting. Great chapter!
Guess its gonna take a while until Harry cools down. I don't want to imagine what would have happened if Braiden got hurt or worse. Even Harry with his great control would have gone Harrynator (:D)

I hope the Dursleys woll get theirs and some more soon! Child abusers are the worst!

I really enjoy your story, the fluff/angst genre is mixed just right! :)

Greetings, Heartless93 (I'm on aff.net, dunno why I can't review with my user name)

I am so in love with your stories that I DO NOT mind waiting for your next update. I know that you will update when you can. And when you do it will be just as good as all the rest chapters from before. Please do not let anyone upset you about updating. I will be here waiting patiently for your next chapter.

as always a good chapter and goo to know the dursley case is coming up soon. i get a busy life a lot of good authors have very busy lives if other people don't like it they can just suck it. it is not thier story. you update when your ready to and i will wait til then.

Love reading your story, it makes my day when every time I see a new post :) I also think its awesome how each baby has its own personality, that you don't just talk of them as a whole. So thanks for what you write I can't wait to read more because this is definitely one of my all time favourite fan fiction stories <3

I had a squeal fit in the middle of class when I finally checked my email and saw the email saying you'd updated! I always love when you post a new chapter!
I keep imagining how the trial will go, and am excited to read your potrayal of the scene because it is bound to be absolutely fabulous like everything you write!
I think you update plenty, I'm an impatient person, I like immediate responses; but I understand the writing process and having a life outside of fanfiction. I appreciate that you take time to write, and I'm always recommending your stories to my friends who read fanfiction. I would be just as happy with your updates if it took you a year to update; and I usually appreciate the time it take for you to update, because I'm easily stressed, and the excitement I get when I see the new chapter makes me feel like all my stress has been kicked aside.
But, it is GLSEN's No-Name Calling Week, and I've worn rainbow every day this week! I'm proud! [Ha! Proud of my ability to wear craziness with a straight face and proud of my sexuality!]
And proud bcause I've ignored my evil name calling mind and didn't call this person-who-is-so_utterly-unpleasant-there-is-NO-euphemism-worthy-to-describe-her an "envious ratchet hoe-bag," even though she deserved it. She hates me because even though I'm...unique? her boyfriend likes me [I'm uninterested. My love is a doe-eyes Brazilian, who laughs like a hyena-car-alarm, and has homophobic parents, and sings jingle bells to me in Portugese continuously, no matter how many times in a row I ask her. She's short (4 feet 11 inches), and has long brown hair, and sings Disney songs like a child with me, and is a wonderful cuddler, and and is going to formal with me in March, and she always listens when I talk with her (and I'm a chatterbox on the days when I'm not being introvertastic), and yells at my twin brother when he makes me cry, but she's almost never mad, and I adore her so much that even if I would date someone who asks me out while his girlfriend stands right there, I would say no because I'm already emotionally attached to the most amazing, beautiful, loving person I could imagine.]
And she reads this fic with me when I re-read it, even if I've read it the day before entire way through.


Luvzeez.

Doctor: 8 hugs a day is good for your health, it extends your life and helps you sleep better.
Patient: You're full of shit! I get repeated hugs from all of my friends continuously, and I've been geting about 3 hours of sleep a night, and I'm pretty sure I'm keeling over at around the age of 62.
Doctor: That is awfully specific, you are only 22.
Patient: Ha! I wasn't at all specific, I didn't mention the number of days, weeks or months after my 62nd birthday I would pass away.
Doctor: Of course! I realize your purpose...

I really enjoyed this chapter, even though Harry spent most of it mad at Max and Nasta!
I thought the scene with Braiden was the most adorable thing ever. I like that you put stuff in about the babies growing, because they become characters on their own, instead of just being 'the babies'.
I also love Richard and Myron. I think it's hilarious that Myron is always chastising Richard!

I hope Harry forgives Max and Nasta soon! Another good chapter and I can't wait for the next one!

Also, ignore all those who think this story is the center of your universe. They are probably the ones who have never tried writing a novel length story like this. Keep up the good work, and have a happy birthday!