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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person avril27
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday! Thanks for the update I really love this story. I hope you know that some of you readers get you have a life outside of writing fan fiction and we are happy to see that chapter when every it comes out so take some to have fun life is short.
person hotflower901
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy birthday. Hope it is awesome. Unless you have walked in Harry's shoes it is sometimes difficult to remember his abuse. Since she doesn't have a connection to Harry, she might not see him as a person.
person Atty
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow for a second I forgot this was just a fanfiction. You're such a great writer!! I absolutely love this story keep up the stellar work and happy birthday!!
person Savana
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
just wanted to say that your story is amazing. I know some people complain about the amount of time it takes you to update, but i find that there is always a new chapter when I most need the pick-me-up. Enjoy your birthday, and thank you for devoting so much time to putting your amazing story out into the world.
person Layla
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wish you a Happy Birthday!! I so do enjoy reading your story. I only wish I could write like this. You make the characters so real and alive. Please continue for I do love to see see and read what will happen next.
person ladywolfinmt
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I promise I will never bug you about updates, although if they are more than a year apart I may worry about you and wonder if you are alright. I love this story and look forward to where you will take it from here, I really kind of hope that Harry has a non fertile heat but as this is your story I will just have to wait and see ... lol. Please ignore all those who seem to think they have the right to demand super fast updates, after all for one, you do this for free and hopefully your own enjoyment and another those idiots who seem to think they are intitled to moan and complain, should try writing their own stories. I don't think I have that kind of talent and am in awe of all the really well written stories that I have read by unpaid fanfiction authors. If I start reading a story and don't enjoy it, I just choose not to read it, I am always gobsmacked at the number of supposedly intelligent people who don't seem to understand that simple concept and write nasty reviews instead. Please take all the time you need to write the new chapters, and ignore those who bitch about it. sincerely, ladywolfinmt
person Alma Estes
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope you have an awesome birthday. Very good chapter.
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great updates :)' I have to admit I'd wondered this about Ashley myself since the beginning and wondered if you we're going to address it or if it would just be a part of her character. It's always been obvious that Myron and Richard love Harry but Ashley has always had more interest in Harry's pregnancies and children than anything else, like with the quins and what she said to Narcissa that time. I'm glad you got the boys back together after their fight, I have to admit you had me on the edge after that chapter with the fight, I felt Harry's anger and wondered how they'd be forgiven, I'm glad it's behind them. I will be patiently for your next update, because unlike some mean people I understand there's such a thing as real life you have to deal with on a daily basis. Would I be mean if I said I hope Harry has a fertile heat and Draco and Blaise get kids out of this one rather than the other two who got them all last time? I'd love to see Malfoy twins and another Blaise baby, three wouldn't be too many right LOL, poor Harry I'm so mean! Thanks for the updates :)

Rosalie
person sexytiger
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ello dear. first thing i want to say happy birthday :3. second, i enjoyed the chapter and the previous ones that followed. so much has happened that i don't know where to begin with the review. well i'll start with this chapter by saying you had me on edge until i caught the gist of what was happening. i can understand how harry could interpret ashleigh's motives as it were since he can have kids and she cannot. i would just hate the fact that that issue would tear the family apart. so far from the chapters i've read i'm falling more in love with braiden and the quints as well as harry's harem of hotness. sidenote when will harry take flight with his wings i mean i.know he's flown with them but not like full out used them and when we will see that lovable grandfather of max's i'm.mad i cant recall his name x.x alexander was it...i.feel horrid but iwould like to see him. okay going to stop my ramblings for now. just wishing you many.more years and brilliant ideas :-3
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy birthday! Thanks for updating. I love the capters! I feel sorry for harry. Max really should talk to his dads about is mom.