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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person justme
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Herzlich Gl
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday! Did you know you are almost a full two years older then me? Anyway the title to this chapter had me worried for a bit, but it's all good! Well not all good, but better then what I was expecting.
person Nicole
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday! I love reading this story, every chapter is awsome and I cannot wait for more. You are a great writer!
person mzz
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry, things always come up to make his life difficult. I don't quite remember when it started but I began to wonder about Ashleigh's intentions as well. I think she loves her family very much but the trauma of what she went through has changed her a bit. After being robbed of the ability to have children it makes sense that she would want to take advantage of any opportunity that comes up. Too bad it affects Harry. I feel bad for Max but I think he's so strong for not making excuses for his mother.
Great chapter once again Star! Enjoy your birthday :)
person frances
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy birthday!

I have been reading this since it was only 5 or 6 chapters, but am only just now telling you what I think. It is one of the best I have every read. Thank you for keeping it going. So many good stories get abandoned. I think some of the people demanding updates are just afraid you will abandon this story.

I have one small request will you please give us another steamy and/or sweet scene between Nasta and Max. It could play into h/c over the issue with Max's family or it could come later. I enjoyed the part of 34 where they had a cuddle and their scene together in 40.
person Jan
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!! So happy you decided to update on your Bday ^_^

Poor Max, I really feel bad for him, how could his mom be so careless... or is it heartless? I feel that she truly see Harry as a baby maker and almost as nothing else, can't wait for your next update, so please update chapter 68 soon.
person Mel
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday!

I loved this chapter. Harry needs attention, but not too much. He wants love while also being independant.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

I love this story. Usually I stop reading when the story isn't finished or I won't read it at all, because most people don't update. I've been following your story for about a year.

I LOVE it. You're doing a great job.

person grim1989
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Curious if Harry will allow her around him and the babies anymore o:
person Kawaiiyashie
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy birthday!!!!!!!!!!!! Im glad you decided to update it was an awsome chapter!
person Alya
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday! I love your story! You update a lot more often than most others, nobody should be telling you that you don't do it often enough. I woke up and saw this chapter and it made my whole day!