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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Anon
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First of all happy birthday. Second, and please don't take this the wrong way, I thought you were older. Your writing style is so mature for someone so young. I thought you might be a professional writer and this was just a hobby.
person Ravenmaster7
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday! Hope you enjoy it the you want to! And THANK YOU!!!!!! I have been patiently waiting for updates, but I know how busy life can get and how writing sometimes has to be put on the back burner. I love this story and i cant wait to see where it goes! I can't wait until you reveal which one of the quins is a dracken, i understand the suspence and the build up to the big reveal but i can't wait!!!!! (side note i think it's Tegan) Also i'd like to thank you for clarifying that hiccup about the faerie and valkarie. Finally I have some questions, What is it that makes Harry so fertile that he would go into heat 3 months after the quins traumatic birth? Is it his power level or something else? and What determines the the heat cycle length?
person Alyssa
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy birthday! Thanks so much for the update, it was great! I definitely don't mind if RL gets in the way and updates take longer, I know how hard it can be. Can't wait for the next update when you have time!
person zura
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday~

I'm really glad you updated, even though you didn't have to seeing as it's your birthday and all.

I know that I'm eventually going to find out in the story, but why does Ashleigh do that? It seems she's almost always doing something to offend/hurt Harry or those other than Max. I mean I know she doesn't mean it and that it comes out subconsciously, but one would think she would think before she speaks, ya know? It saddens me that she seems only to see Harry as a way to get close to babies, since Harry is basically the only Dracken that lets her near children. Shes seemed like such a good mother figure, if a tad off.
Kind of also wonder what's going to happen the heat cycle. That makes me worry quite a bit, since even though Harry loves his children, he feels also that he's ruining chances to go and do family vacations. It would be great if Harry had Draco's kid due to this heat but at the same time it would be nice to see Harry go through a heat without getting pregnant.
I hope all goes well for Harry during the trial, but it wouldn't be such a good story if the trial went smoothly. I hope all those that Harry considers family and friends will be there to support them, even if I'm not liking Ashleigh at the moment, and the Malfoys are tied up at the moment with Severus.
What is going to happen to Severus?
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
great update and happy bday
person christine granger
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy birthday Star as my special gift to you I give you my first review on this site. I truly love your stories when I get stuck while writing one of my stories I read mainly The Rise of the Drackens to get inspiration.
person dominique1
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy birthday again have a good weekend . what to say i have to agree i feel like she only see harry as a baby making machine for herself. she always does somthing to hurt harry around the babies but i do hope that other than the case with richard that harry has the other grandparents watch the babies now anyway want more i do hope harry gets babies again
person Heartless93
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well then, happy B-day! :D

Wouldn't surprise me if all Babies were Drackens. :)

Poor Max! It is never good to be between the fronts...*sighs*

Glad you gave us a second chapter! *grins*

Heartless93

person Amanda
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this fic!!! It is a lot different then the other ones out there. And I do not care that it is not updated a lot because the chapters tend to be longer.
person lauri
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and wait eagerly for the updates. HAPPY BIRTHDAY and many more