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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule November 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This chapter makes me want to rip out my soul and feed it to an infant.  So conflicted right now. 

schedule November 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Silly question but since Leolin is Fae does that mean he will have no Dracken traits at all? It interesting because that would mean that Dracken is not a dominant gene. I never really thought of it but it is clear as day. They are both Recessive genes and due to Nasta having both in his bloodline there would be a way for him to have them but it's been hundreds of years. So would Harry have to have some Fae  as an ancestor as well? or is it that this is a gene that can come about under special circumstances, such as having a poweful wizard as a momma? 

schedule November 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

 I know that this story has been out for ages but I can't help but write when something comes to mind. I adore this story though some parts make my insides ache. I love how you approached many of the harder situations. 

The only thing I am confused about with this is why he won't tell me about his past and why the freal frack haven't they questioned him about it. Especially Max, people are nosy and love some gossip. Now I may be a single pringle but even I would question my SO when they freak out. Heck I would question if they thought I was strange every day. When I was pregnant I just wanted food and didn't really want to let others know how I really felt....I think I just answered my own questions. 

schedule November 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I didn't like this chapter all that much. Then again I don't date, but he went to everyones parents to tell them something. Something that had the potential to piss all their parents off. It would have been ok to rant to one person, but all of them...really? Yes he didn't go to everyone but aside from Draco, every is getting chewed out. 

To me that seems a little petty of Harry. He never told someone that it was ok. Never told anyone that he could handle it but thanks for the offer. Nope he just went on marry way. I feel like this will come back to bite him. 

 

 

Side note* 

I am sad that draco will not be able to father anyone this time. Considering he is the one that needs to father a child the most. His dad being so disapproving of his relarionship... still children should not be used as a bargaining chip for someones love. So while it does seem a little sad that he will not be a biological father it could be for the best. 

I do know that he will still be a father but not one by blood. By blood seems to matter most to his father. Draco doesn't seem to care. They all love their children regardless of who fathered them 

person Guess who
schedule November 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Goddamnit stop making me cry ;_; ;_; Little Leo..........

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schedule October 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

 I have just started reading this series and I have to say, it is amazing!!

So far on chapter 10 but I Hope Nasta stays around. He is a doll ^-^

schedule October 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

 I loved this chapter. It made me smile and yet cry at times. It's one thimg to hear someone tell anothers story, but when you finally get to meet that person and discover their personality. i don't know . ..it brings it all home. 

  I know that those who lost children or a spouse feel loads of pain, to see them happy and smiling over their childrens mate and future child makes me want to weep outloud. 

  I am single mom to a lovely toddler. I made a lot of mistakes in my past.This made me look forward to the future, her future. Even if my life goes to hell I will do everything possible to make her happy and safe. 

This chapter goes to show that people can overcome so much and still look towards the future with hope 

schedule October 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

 This chapter was kind of funny in a weird way. I love the parents but I don't understand Myron. I want to root for him as a parent but I also would love to see his face be ripped to shreads. 

GUAAHHHH my poor heart and soul. 

person Guess who
schedule October 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

SEV!!!!!!!! I'M CRYING UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

;_; ;_; ;_; ;_;

person Guess Who
schedule October 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Lololololololololool That Henley guy? He has the same birthday as I!!~ XD

And also when the realization took over when it was Dray in the end like looooooool I shoulda seen that coming because of the description BUT STILL XD