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First off, Happy Birthday to you, i hope you had a good one(might be a bit late seeing as i just saw your two chapters.)

Wonderful chapter's i just read both 66 and 67 tonight and they were wonderful. poor harry hes been through so much already and now this all happens ouch. I look forward to reading the next chapters so ee what happens between max's mother and the family.

Just finished reading the whole story again. I love what you have created so much and I'm always fanatically checking for more. I can't believe that Ashleigh said that to Harry. She's been hurtful before but I wasn't quite expecting this. I was glad when Max found out though and also glad that he made it clear he choice was Harry. Its becoming obvious that Ashleigh only cares about baby. That's basically the only she talks about and is always her first reaction when something happens. I do hope that they work it out though because Max did love his mother and I don't want Myron and Richard to suffer from this. Perhaps something is wrong with Ashleigh and making her this way because even though Richard and her are both childish she is much more so and something about her just doesnt seem right sometimes.

Sidenote, this is the longest review I've ever written as I only review stories that I like as much as some of my favorite novels :)

happy birthday !!! I love your story, max's mother made a bad move ...she will propably not see his grandchildrens soon.love your story. see you soon

Happy Birthday!! Thanks for the updates, especially the one on your birthday - that takes dedication :) Will we find out who the other baby Dracken is soon? My curiosity is killing me! I really want it to Calix because having a Dracken as the head of the 'most noble and ancient House of Black' would be fantastic - I think Sirius would be very impressed once he got over the shock ;)

HS

Hope you had a great birthday day!

The chapter title kinda freaked me out, so whew! Glad my assumption was wrong.

Really enjoying the story and I hope for Harry's sake he doesn't get preggers again. lol

JOYEUX ANNIVERSAIRE!
I hope your birthday went well!

(I tried to post a reveiw a few minutes earlier but my computer turned off while I sent it. If you receive twice the same review from me, I'm very sorry, I'm not trying to harass you! :p)

First, thank you so much for the quick update! that new chapter was fabulous! I feel so disapointed by Max's mother's reaction. She was a character I liked so much, I hope everything will get better between the two families... I would hate it for Max to give up on his parents over Harry... So sad... Now I can't wait for another chapter! I reaaally want to know how things will evolve!

I have a little question for you though (if you do not mind answering of course): I understood drackens developped faster than humans. But I was wondering exactly how fast? Will Braiden look like 2 when he'll be 1year old? Will he look like 16 when he'll be 8? I have troubles understanding that bit... (are drackens developping in a similar way than Bella's daughter in Twilight, maybe?)

Anyway, I'm always fond of your story and impatiently waiting for the rest! You're an amazing writer!

hello lovely, it's a little late but happy birthday! *holds out black forest cake*
beautiful chapter, although all of them are exceptional.
and now I shall wait patiently for the next chapter :3

I appreciate all updates you put up!! I certainly anticipate each one greatly and am a little disappointed when I don't see a new chapter, but I understand you have a real life. Your writing is an inspiration in comparison to some others whose grammar and plot lines don't appear to exist. Thank you for updating when you can!!

OOOOMMMMMGGGGG!!!! i started reading this story about two days ago and i am sooooo hooked!!! take as much time as you need to get your creative juices flowing to create another chapter!........but not tooooo long ;)

Happy birthday darling!!! Hope it was a wonderful day. Whenever you get upset with those ninnywits that haven't learned patience or courtesy, please remember how many of us are simply happy and touched that you take the time to share your creativity, talent, and execllent character development with all of us. I know I adore this story, and all the characters you have introduced us to. I can honestly say that I, personally haven't read a better story on AFF. Will be looking forward to your future works, both fan fiction and original published works. <3 Lach