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Ok, I just spent my sick week re-reading this story because of the Ashleigh situation. I wanted to go back and see if I had missed how she interacted with Harry.

I have come to the conclusion that you are the Lord of Subtlety and I bow to your skills. Every interaction Ashleigh had with Harry had something to do with a baby. The first thing she asks is about them or if she can hold one. Even after Nott the first thing that she thinks of is that Harry can't have any more of Max's children. Forget the rest of his mates or the psychological trauma that would have on Harry, it's all about making more babies.
She was also the only one not worried about how the pregnancy with the quints would effect Harry's health and well being. Looking back has made all the little things I noticed at the time come back and jump out at me. It should have been apparent after Alexander's party that Ashleigh was a typical selfish submissive--Alexander didn't spent any time with her, only Myron and Richard.
So I have to wonder--is one of the reasons that Harry didn't want Ashleigh to be near his kids at first because he could sense that things were not all right in her head? Would be interesting.

It was also a treat to remember that I share the same birth date with my favorite Dominant, Nasta. GO Feb. 3rd!!!

Anyways, keep up the good work Lord of Subtlety and will keep enjoying all of your writings. =)

I love this story I just read it in under a week. My only question so far is when the quints were born the other mates were there within an hour weren't they so wouldn't they have smelled the babys and know which was a draken?

Thank you so much for your answer! I understand much more clearly now!
And thank you for such a quich update! A very nice chapter, as per usual!
I can't wait for your next update!!! I hope it's going to be a chapter about the Heat! (and that Harry will become pregnant with a little Malfoy this time... I want to see Draco and his parents' reaction soooo much! I also hope he'll never lose a baby. That is just a too horrible thing...)
And I hope we will soon learn the "official" reason for Max's mother behavior... Oh, My! So much for you to write about and for us to read...!

Anyway, don't forget to update but do not overwork yourself either!
I'll write again with the upcoming chapter!
A bientot!

I am seriously not liking how vulnerable and emotional Harry is. But at the same time I get that for the story to work he has to be this way-- his insecurities move the plot which is just delicious btw.
At this point I am also seriously wondering what Ashleigh's problem is? My guess is early onset Alzheimer's disease but I guess I'll just have to wait and see. Your posting schedule suits me just fine as long as you finish your excellent fic I'm a happy reader, but not too soon if you please :)

So, this story is amazing, I just caught up to this point and gods.....please continue, please. It is amazing and I ampicky about my harry potter stories and this one is just too amazing!

Bahahahaha! I am at work and trying not to laugh at them talking about what their favorite word is! I love the fast updates! And slow ones make me sad :(, but I know how life is. I had a question for you last chapter, and now I can't remember it.... I'll have to go back and read it again. I know it had something to do with them being drackens and something they do, but that's it. Keep up the great work, and I hope it's not to long of a delay for the next chapter! :)

Well, took me forever to get this point. I absolutely LOVE this story. I found it originally on ff.net under the original title (from the first author). I didn't notice at first that it was adopted and when I first read that one chapter and then realized there wasn't anymore I almost cried. But then, I noticed the author had said it had been adopted. Then I followed the link and found it! XD

Anyway, took me about a week to get to this chapter - I am sad that the story isn't finished yet (usually I only read completed ones, because I am so impatient), but I also notice you update pretty frequently. And, the story is so good that I can be patient (it will be good practice for me too!). So you continue doing what you are doing (and take as much time as you need as long as you don't abandon it...that would be very sad if you did!), and I really can't wait to read more.

The character development is just so fantastic, and I especially love the original characters (particularly Max & Nasta). It's been a real treat to read this story - I honestly thought I had read all the good ones out there -though I have been learning to branch out a bit more - and to dig a little deeper.

Well, anyway - ta for now! Good luck with it all! :)
*CodeRomance*
~Manda

as to your semi rant, i don't get the ppl who do that. i really don't. i've never yet seen a writer who did more because of and didn't get pissed off at those nagging them.
is there a reason they didn't just use magic to repair stuff? or house elves?
despite hars understandable angst, its good to see him not completely ruled by his instincts.

well, nothing like one crisis to distract you from another... still, WHAT THE HELL WAS SHE THINKING?! i'm glad hars mates are rallying round him, and he around them.

wow, thats not cool. maybe she could use further therapy or something, cause regarding har as a breeder can't be healthy.
its great that alex can take them, he'll be stoked.
well, the guys have some clue what to do if that happens again now. the sitch is just stressful for all of them.
as for the lack of rapid updates... meh, we were spoiled a bit. things are just going back to normal.

Thank you

Awesome chapter, Braiden and the babies are just getting more cuter!!! And happy birthday, though this review is a bit late. ^.^;