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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I totally love it.. I like the fact you use the familymembers in the story, you use them as characters and not as info.. I like it.. Well written.. :D
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Not a rubbish heat scene at all. Heat scenes are so crazed...as a reader, I almost feel it's better they're glazed over. Leaves more juicy fun bits for the non-heat-induced smex!
Two months.... I forget where we are in the acedemic year. Is that pre- or post-NEWTs? Either way, glad for the repreive. I'd forgotten dry-heats, which is rather funny when you count up how many times they've been mentioned. Have you decided on the Malfoy twins being faternal or identical? Boys or girls? A little Malfoy boy and Malfoy daughter would be super cute, I'm thinking. ^__^
Oh, and you still have a big reveal for the 2nd Dracken baby. It'll be interesting to see if you go with the obvious choice in Farren because it's, well, obvious--Dracken babies are bigger and develop faster and you've had the characters repetively mentioning how big and fast growing Farren is--or if you play a "sneak attack": Calix or Tegan or Regan. :/ You know, other that Tegan being the only daughter so far, it's harder for me to remember which is which. [huffs] Calix is mentioned often...because of his rash, right? But not so much Regan, I don't think? Tegan and Regan are Nasta's? Calix and Farren are Max's? Any of the three, though, would make for fine submissives, I'm thinking.
All, well.... I think I'm due for a rereading of this story soon. ^_^ It's sometimes hard to believe how far it's come, but your chapters are always delicious in length, and I'm rather fond of the choice not to break the story up into "books" or a series. Not easy-to-resist for many authors, fanfic or otherwise. Kudos, as always.
Thanks for writing!
~AR
Two months.... I forget where we are in the acedemic year. Is that pre- or post-NEWTs? Either way, glad for the repreive. I'd forgotten dry-heats, which is rather funny when you count up how many times they've been mentioned. Have you decided on the Malfoy twins being faternal or identical? Boys or girls? A little Malfoy boy and Malfoy daughter would be super cute, I'm thinking. ^__^
Oh, and you still have a big reveal for the 2nd Dracken baby. It'll be interesting to see if you go with the obvious choice in Farren because it's, well, obvious--Dracken babies are bigger and develop faster and you've had the characters repetively mentioning how big and fast growing Farren is--or if you play a "sneak attack": Calix or Tegan or Regan. :/ You know, other that Tegan being the only daughter so far, it's harder for me to remember which is which. [huffs] Calix is mentioned often...because of his rash, right? But not so much Regan, I don't think? Tegan and Regan are Nasta's? Calix and Farren are Max's? Any of the three, though, would make for fine submissives, I'm thinking.
All, well.... I think I'm due for a rereading of this story soon. ^_^ It's sometimes hard to believe how far it's come, but your chapters are always delicious in length, and I'm rather fond of the choice not to break the story up into "books" or a series. Not easy-to-resist for many authors, fanfic or otherwise. Kudos, as always.
Thanks for writing!
~AR
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Harry only had a dry heat. Though he will stress every time they come up, he needs a break from being pregnant even if only for another two months. Kudos to Harry for standing up for Amelle and little Nora. Let's hope that Ashleigh gets the help she needs soon.
~~ Meechy
~~ Meechy
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting chapter, and a great read as always. I actually particularly enjoyed the talk with Amelle now that we are really getting to see her without all her barriers up all the time. It was also good to see the mates on Harry's side about not smothering submissives during pregnancy, hope they manage to keep that in mind when Harry gets pregnant again. Alexander is great as always but he seemed a lot more subdued in this chapter, which makes sense given the stress of everything going on with his children at the moment. Kind of glad Harry had an infertile heat, just felt right with the pace of the story and I can understand you keeping it short given you will have to write another heat pretty soon.
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
you have no Idea hoe happy I was to see this update!! I have been thinking about the story but didn't want to bug you with a request for an update. I LOVE this story and I think you made the right choice making this last heat a dry one, though I hope the story quickly moves to the next heat. I would love to see Draco have twins. Just two for him this time. Keep up the wonderful work I wait as patiently as possible for the next update!
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS MY FAVORITE PART IN THE STORY LOVE ALEXANDER
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I greatly enjoy this story and think you are a very talented individual. That being said I have noticed a few inconsistancies. It may just be that I am misunderstanding but:
In Chapter 26: Nightmare or Reality when we get are first look at Marianna she is talking about the fact that she is about to go onto heat. My understanding from your description is that only submissives can go on heat and as Marianna is a dominate I thought I would ask you about it because it confused me.
My only other note is that in your latest chapter you said that Nasta and Blaise had already eaten when they brought the food back to Harry and the others but in Chapter 27 Nasta says "A top dominant is not allowed to eat until all those subordinate to him have started eating.
In Chapter 26: Nightmare or Reality when we get are first look at Marianna she is talking about the fact that she is about to go onto heat. My understanding from your description is that only submissives can go on heat and as Marianna is a dominate I thought I would ask you about it because it confused me.
My only other note is that in your latest chapter you said that Nasta and Blaise had already eaten when they brought the food back to Harry and the others but in Chapter 27 Nasta says "A top dominant is not allowed to eat until all those subordinate to him have started eating.
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, its kinda funny that I started out liking Ashleigh and hated Amelle and now I really don't like Ashleigh but I'm starting to like Amelle! Can't wait for the next update
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you oh writing goddess it was a wonderful chapter
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i am SO pulling for Draco to end up with identical twins. that would be wonderful for him and his family, as well as being easier on harry if they were the only two he was carrying.