rate_review Reviews

chapter one I felt was very disjointed. There are several spelling mistakes and the tense sometimes got mixed up. Though I like what was going on if it flowed smoothly it would have been so much better.
chapter 2 flowed well. The story was easy to get into and I could feel more for the characters as they played out. I especially like Snape and how you captured his essence while making him yours. There were still a couple spelling mistakes but on the whole the 2nd chapter was a delight to read.
I'm looking forward to the 3rd chapter and seeing how all the elements of the story play out.

*** slight spoiler - was the magistrate male or female? and if male did you intend your character to be gay? you have that the person was meeting his husband which is why I ask.

I love your story. please more?

I'm intrigued. This is turning out to be a really interesting and I'm really looking forward to more. I hope that you post soon so we can find out what the announcement is!

i like it so far please don't let harry be with ginny its sad that they left him to suffer they do not deserve harry

Your story has a good start.Albus Dumbledore along with his so called dead parents.Looking Forward to reading more.

I am loving your story so far. WOW!!! What was the point of leaving Harry, making him beleave everyone abandondhim or died, making his life hell on earth??? I'm upset there is no pairing (I was thinking Snape/Harry or Draco/Harry would really get at all of them), but I'll keep reading, I want to see where this goes.
Very good, thank you *.*

I really like the start of this story. Really intereting and I can't wait to see where you take it. I feel so sorry for Harry.

What an interesting story. Please continue!