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by alecto

schedule November 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*faints*

Gahhhhh I was really not expecting smut so soon! But I'm not complaining!

OMG I don't even know where to start. All I know is that I pretty much held my breath the whole entire chapter because it was sooooo amazing!

The interaction between between Ginny and Draco was soooo good. I can totally see those two making friends throughout their teen years and having some pent up sexual tension with one another. And Lucius getting jealous from the interaction just made the interaction so much better!

The scene where Lucius and Ginny are basically fighting each other before the smut was incredible. In fact, it was so well written that I found myself saying out loud "They're fucking crazy!"

And when they shagged OMG amazing description of the carpet burn and pleasure and sticky pain and wetness ... Gods you always did an amazing job writing smut scenes!

And Harry being jealous that Ginny may have fucked Malfoy--gods I smirked like a Slytherin pulling a fast one on a Gryffindor.

As you can see, your chapter was so amazing and well written that I couldn't even diversify my vocabulary hahaha

I really hope you update soon--I can't live without your fics to keep me happy.

Also, you should watch out for my Ginny/Lucius fics on Livejournal. If you follow Lucius Big Bang, within the month all three should come to you.

I have also uploaded a new Lucius/Ginny fic. It sounds light hearted but its actually fairly dark (well, I find it is lol).

Anywho, I've rambled on long enough about how much I love this fic.

Am dying for the next chapter!!!

Much Love
Koolgirl18
schedule November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, this should be very interesting! I can't wait to see how this goes!
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*faints* Yay you updated! Did I ever mention how much I love you?? Because I do!

What a great chapter. The unresolved sexual tension is finally beginning. Lucius likes Ginny that much we know. But does Ginny like him back? That we don't know sadly and I can't wait until she realizes that she like Lucius Malfoy romantically. It'll probably piss her off. hahahaha

And as much as I love Hermione's character, I have to admit that I laughed out loud when you said she was 'fucking stupid when it came to real life.' It quite refreshing to hear criticisms about her character in the HP world. I find that if I criticize her character at all, that I'm attacked. She's like a god! And sometimes, reading fanfiction with her character is like reading a Mary Sue on steroids. hahaha

Anywho, Can't wait for the next chapter. And lucky for you, I will be uploading a new Ginny/Lucius story very soon on this site. Keep posted :D

Much Love
Koolgirl18
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you wrote the party! I felt Lucius' and Ginny's pain. But I bet they'll be the talk of the ton the next day. My favorite part of this chapter was at the end when Ginny braided Lucius' hair. How utterly sweet!

You know what? I think Lucius is falling for our Ginny Weasley--and I think Ginny is doing the same. Can't wait to see what happens next ;)

By the way, I'm actually writing two Lucius Fics for Lucius Big Bang on livejournal. It starts sometime in November on Lucius' birthday so look out for it. There will be two Lucius/Ginny stories during the fest for sure. But if you don't go on livejournal, as soon as the masterlist is out, I'm posting them on this website. Don't worry, you'll get so much Lucius/Ginny centric fanfiction by the end of this year that you'll need a break from the couple for a little while lol

Can't wait for your next update. As always, you are my hero!

Much Love
koolgirl18
person moi
schedule July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I'm looking forward the next chapter.
schedule July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter! We really got to see different sides of both Ginny and Lucius--something that allowed us to look deeper into who they were as people.

I also loved the comparison that Ginny made between Lucius and Harry. I mean really, despite Harry being the hero of the magical world he is dark at heart because he had a piece of Voldemort's soul inside of him.

But my absolute favorite part of this whole entire chapter was the bickering between Lucius and Ginny when they were talking about his experience with men. It was so playful without Lucius feeling any shame about his sexual preferences.

My favorite line in the whole entire story chapter when Ginny said "Don't talk about my knickers." The line is so Ginny and yet so Molly all at the same time. I nearly cried laughing when I read it.

Overall, great chapter! Can't wait to see how Harry reacts when he hears about Ginny going on a date with Lucius Malfoy. Sparks (or fists) will fly that's for sure!

By the way, where's Snape? That sexy dark haired wizard can't escape from this story can it? Although I'm simply happy with Lucius and Ginny so if you decide to exclude Snape that's okay (adding him would be the cherry on top of the Malfoy/Weasley cake though ...)

Alright, that's it! I've decided that I'm going to write a Ginny/Lucius one shot for you because you do such a good job with all of your fics. If you follow this link: http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php/topic/21086-the-pink-lacy-knicker-project/ and reply to my thread of what you want as a one shot present, I'll be more than happy to write something for you!

Okay, I'm done with my random ranting!

Thanks for the chapter of heaven!

Much love
koolgirl18
schedule June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay so am I not the only one who thinks Lucius bloody Malfoy would be sexy as hell in all white? *faints!*

I loved how Lucius and Ginny bantered. They are completely dancing around the fact that they are smitten with each other but they don't want to admit it. And I just loved how you threw a little Draco competition in there. I mean, the little smile she had when she was talking about Draco--they shagged secretly in Hogwarts didn't they? Come one you can tell me--I promise I won't tell anyone else :D

Goodness I absolutely loved this chapter. It was such a great lift to my bad day. I crave this story like a crave water--which means that the longer it takes for you to update the more dehydrated I become. You don't want me to die to you???

LOL JK I totally understand how hard it can be to update a story with life going on around you (I mean, just look at my fic? I haven't updated that thing in a while and I'm pretty sure my fans want to strangle me because of it hahaha).

Therefore, I'll take what you give :D

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Until then!

Lots of Love
Koolgirl18
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I nearly swooned when you described Lucius having a bit of silver in his blonde locks. I find that incredibly sexy. As always, your Lucius is completely sensual and shaggable without him even having to try and seduce our lucky Ginny Weasley.

I am addicted to your writing style and stories so if you stop, I'll go through withdrawal and die (and you don't want me to die to you? I promise I'm a sweet person and most people don't want me to die including yourself).

Keep up the good work. You are honestly the only Ginny/Lucius fanfic writer that I can find in fanficiton world so I'll cry (and again go through withdrawal) if you stop writing!

Much love!

Koolgirl18
schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was so engrossed while reading this, please update soon!
person savigar
schedule May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning; I'm hooked! I really like your Ginny... Can't wait to see her lock horns (or anything else:-) with the lovely Mr. Malfoy.