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May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, if you want to continue the theme of someone thought dead but now alive, like Remus, then I vote for Severus. Also, there would be more angst there since they have a history together already. Interesting idea, pretty good writing but does need some clean up. Thank you.
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May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting first chapter, I liked it. I loved that you "saved" Remus and my vote goes for you saving Severus too, if anyone deserves another chance for happiness and a free life it would be Severus. Besides, i find the threesome with Hermione, Remus and Severus very, very sexy:-))
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May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of the purple spell linking them together, I can't wait to see how you tie Severus into their partnership.
If you want to bring in one of the malfoys then I think that maybe using ron or harry would be a fun way to go.
I look forward to your next chapter Xx
If you want to bring in one of the malfoys then I think that maybe using ron or harry would be a fun way to go.
I look forward to your next chapter Xx
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May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Draco.
I'd really like to see howo this goes down, and keep reading, and my vote is Draco.
I'd really like to see howo this goes down, and keep reading, and my vote is Draco.
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May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
good chap :)