rate_review Reviews

I'm dying for your next post!! I love the story you've created and the details are so beautifully written. Adding small plot thickeners (Draco's strained relationship with his family, Blaise using house elves, etc.) really make the story more intriguing and complex. They make me want to know more and keep reading. The naughty bits help a lot too! You do a wonderful job writing the love scenes. They're extremely detailed and perfectly erotic!! I can't wait to read what happens next! xoxo SM

Holy fuck. That was hot.

As I sit here pondering what in the world to give you as feedback, it occurs to me that, among the many emotions vying to be recognized within me at the moment, prominent among them is this deep sense of WANTING. I have no idea what it must be like to be under the snare of such a charismatic man, let alone the beauty and sensationalized torrent of emotions and reactions that one could experience with such a man. I can very much feel for Hermione and have often, throughout this fantastic fiction of yours, felt as though her thoughts could be mine, had I been in her shoes. (Amusingly enough, occassionally a thought would cross my mind and then not two seconds later I would read that same thought cross hers!)
Your writing is so full of description, passion, suspense, LIFE...that I am truly transported from my average, some-what lonely existance into the lives of another and I am truly quite honored to have the priviledge of reading it. I am so very pleased that you have returned to writing. My face lit up with excitement upon seeing a new chapter posted. (And I do hope RL is treating you kinder these days, author dear!)
As for Hermione and Draco....ah me. How I feel for them both. Something tells me it will not be quite as easy going as Draco seems to think. (Being a Malfoy, he is arrogantly sure of himself and his control over the situation, isn't he?) I do worry about Hermione and her fragile heart. (p.s. LOVED the oxytocin reference, btw!) But if there ever was a doubt (and honestly who in their right mind would doubt it??) as to their compatibility--and if that kiss was not enough (again, how I WISH I could have been in her shoes then!)--there is NO DOUBT whatsoever of their compatibility now!
Oh and I'm still highly intrigued by the whole blood magic/spilling of bodily fluids bit. I'm not sure what Draco meant to accomplish. Maybe a sign of trust? Maybe he intends to...IDK...mix their fluids? (And sneaky man--when did he start touching her, erm...well...THERE? And for that matter....has he actual touched her, aside from through her clothes? Because maybe...hmm...maybe it's like throwing down the gauntlet? Maybe he intends to see just how brave our Griffendor girl is? I mean, he's thrust a lot at her today (no pun intended! haha!)---she very neary hyperventilated at one point. Maybe he intends to see just how much he can get away with?
Again, *fantastically fabulous chapter*!! One of the best so far, really. So maybe Draco's pouting did you some good, eh?
Please come back soon with more! And many thanks to your beta! (p.s. it could have just been me but I think the spacing is off on the previous chapter)
Cheers,
SW

Oh and I nearly forgot: 1. I don't understand the reference in the chapter title. 2. I loved the quote at the end. Great idea to include one, and it's quite appropriate too!

WONDERFUL! I love the detail. I can't wait to see where this leads. Thank you for coming back to this story!

Thank you so much for bringing this story back! I was getting worried that this wonderful story wasn't going to get finished. I'm being a little selfish, but I was so intrigued with it when I first read it. I hope things are going well for you on the medical front and I AM so glad Draco is playing nice again. Lol. Yay!

This story was great! i could't stop reading it!!! I won't liw when i say that i come when draco and hermione were on top of their oral sex!
i hope this isn't the end (the 12th chapter). i am begging you: please keep writing!!!!

All I can say is wow. (fanning self)

wow, I like the way you tackle writer's block ;)

Welcome back!! I am very happy for you that you are no longer suffering from your medical issues. Sorry it was hard to get back into the story, but I didn't have any troubles doing so. I have no clue why he wanted his seed on her, but their shared experience was hot and sweet. His begging her to let go and (basically) trust him, was beautiful and I hope she soon realizes that he really does desire her. I can't believe anyone is as innocent as she is. lol Thank you and welcome back! HG4eva