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person mamita
schedule March 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I like your fic, I love how you made the fic, but I do not like the couple BillxCharlie, poor Ronnie, I love Ron here is so sweet and cute, it's a shame that not many people notice it or see it, hehe, I just want and see the Weasley brothers (minus Ginny) with Ron, although I do not like that Ron is the key to my Ron is passive, that is all that is high or large?, plus some of his brothers are bigger and higher Ron, and more experienced, Ron is more shy and innocent, and it shows and you see, but my favorite couple is CharliexRon continues so, I hope you do more of Ron fics with his brothers, lol, thanks.
person mamita
schedule May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi I like your story, especially because it is one of my favorite couples, Charlie / Ron, I do not like is that you leave Bill and Charlie, and Charlie and Ron with others at least not in the same story, I hope you make more stories of this wonderful couple, is well, kisses and thank you very much.
person JanisJ
schedule May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY! SOOO happy to see a new masterpiece from you! What a nice present for my return to having internet (been out for 17 very excruciating days). And the perfect gift for Starstruck's b-day with one of her most favorite pairings!! (can I kind-of share it since my b-day was at the end of April? *hopeful puppy-dog eyes*)

You know I always love your writing... and this is no exception! I loved how you included Bill in the "family curse" but how, in that instance, it had to fall by the wayside-- so Bill's daynamic had secret back-story, (that could have really happened in the series) but still followed canon and that he became happy with Fleur.

AND: Ron and Charlie got their happy (and hot) ending!!!! Hurrah!

PS. The candy kiss was great... especially how Charlie played it off like it was a "punishment" for not sharing his sweets.

Keep up the great work :)
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was very well done. Heartbreaking in a way, fluffy in a way, and somewhere in between all that. I like that Charlie and Ron both tried to fight their feelings, but couldn't. Bill's feelings for Charlie made my heart ache a little. I'm glad that Charlie and Ron got their happy ending, even if Charlie and Bill couldn't.
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...I love all ur fics! And this on was hot, witty, funny, angsty, and wonderful! I adore the way u describe the characters, and thanks to u i fell totaly in love with Charlie! Thank u for writtin!