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Hello!
Now, you said on your first chapter that criticism was welcome. I hope this statement stands true. Please know, I would not have read this far if I didn't enjoy the story. My one concern is that you are falling into the 'wish fulfillment' pit. Your Kabel is simply too perfect. He has a master's degree at 19, he has an ass that can turn a straight man gay, he has a talent that is believed to be more impressive than parseltongue (even if falsely)... please be aware. Characters that are too perfect are not only boring, but annoying. So far its ok... but please be careful of the pit.

It really was pretty daft of Mio not to stop Ginny.
soooo, they'll be spending the rest of the summer in yanky land?

i love this story but i hope that harry gets with viktor krum or marcus flint or andrian purcey no bliase or draco kind of sick of them and no ginny or herimone love it want more and harry needs to tell about his life with his aunt

yeah getting ginny out of the way happy dance and james having sex with ricki but i want to know who destroyed their relationship

I think the thing that bothers me in this chapter was the panther cubs injuries, you say the cub has injuries but then they go to purchase robes with the thing still injured? Not very good if this cub is suppose to be Harry's familiar.

Woah, is there possible incest on the horizon or are Remus, Sirius, Hermione and Ginny jumping to conclusions?

woah, jumping the gun a bit there girls. Shouldn't they get the facts before they come out all guns blazing? they're gunna make idiots of themselvs.

Excellent update here, loved the cliff hanger at the end!

i so hope that the brother get along

wow, how to totally drop a bomb shell. The fall out should be fun. fufufu.