rate_review Reviews

holy hell...that was hot. i really hope there is more of this story ;)

So so hot! Love it!

this is SO good, may I please have more?!

hot! Hot! HOT!
More pls more. *begs shamelessly

Your just so wonderful:) Can't wait to see what you come up with next (double teaming, Severus comes for a visit, toys...), See what you do to me? update soon PLEASE! Looking forward to next chapter *;*

Wow. Your story is awesome. I really want to find out more about Draco's daddy kink and Harry the little cum slut. Perhaps some Lucius directed play between the boys? So hot. My husband loved it...well the fact that it got me hot and I pounced on him.

This story is so hot. I would give almost anything to be a fly on the wall while these three went at it. Very nice descriptions. I love that this story isn't written as though it is a porno, but as though they are truly beginning a relationship.

I think first-person point of view works perfectly for this. And really, I don't understand how anyone could think of it as "distracting". First person helps put me in the mindset, feel like I'm actually there experiencing it myself. I had an English teacher once who told me I could never be an author if I wrote in first person, but my stories still won awards and some of my favorite authors write in that style. Some people are just too narrow-minded.

Okay, I've finished ranting. On the subject of the story, this is spectacularly sexy and I can't wait for more.

I loved it, the way you wrote it from the different persons POV was quite good, I guess I am a pervert, because I love those three together... I'll be looking forward to next chapter!

Wow...just wow. You've blown my brain with this one, please please please update soon? Pretty please? I love how dominant Lucius seems, but might I request that in the coming chapters, could we have more of Draco talking? Your Draco is rather submissive and I'd love to see more of what he thinks concerning this, if possible of course.