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for An Unlikely Desire

by KJmom827

schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
porn a licious, smut tastic, call it what you want. I call it hot, Hot, HOT! A credit to lovers of yaoi everywhere. Thankyou and looking forward to the next update.
person Kermit
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will let Draco be a Dom and Harry a Sub. If Lucius is Dom then Harry and Draco sub. Spanking and punishment would be good to explore. Bondage could work.
person cynaga
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
masterful
person InuGuardian1984*notloggedin*
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I love the story!! It's so full of hot smex!! And three of the HOTTEST men in the Harry Potter universe. I could read each chapter over and over again. I love it!!!
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm going back to re-read each chapter.
CH.1) I love Harry's dirty mouth/talk/thoughts. Lucius in charge / control sounds very good.
Keep up the great job.
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
CH.2) They are all so wonderful together. Father/son share-time,what fun. I think Lucius is holding back a bit, can't wait for him to let loose.
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
CH.3) I LOVE your cock-loving-slut Harry, more more more!!! I hope Lucius gets into/comfotable with the daddy/son play quick.
Love,love,love this chapter, YOU ARE A QUEEN!!!
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
CH.4)If Harry can think, much less be scared, then he just HAS NOT been fucked well enough. Seems the Malfoy men are too used to keeping themselfs under control, Harry will have to work on breaking them of that. Good job *O*
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
CH.5) Agian, I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! Giving or receiving Harrt seems to always be in charge. I would like Lucius and even Draco to be more dom. It would probably be a good idea if Lucius were to bring Severus home to teach them how DOM is done. Can you just see it? Prof.Snape in teacher mode, giving directions, punishments, making demands on everone. A take charge kind of guy. TOYS!!!!
Can't wait to see whats next, you go girl,just put it all out there. Your wonderful!!!!
person Ris
schedule May 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a hot story. I can't wait til the next chapter.