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September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This may very well be the most depravedly dirty, smutty thing I have ever read, and I am enjoying every minute of it. This really isn't a threesome I ever thought of, and I admit to bypassing the story a few times, mainly because I've got a type of chapter story I like and I was just a little confused by the pairing. Honestly, though, it's hot. I didn't know what felching or snowballing were before that chapter, and didn't bother to look it up- I think I figured it out. And I wasn't bothered. The general kinkiness and intensity makes it mind-numbingly sexy, and on top of that, it's extremely well written, which is something I look for above a lot of other things when reading fanfiction (or anything else for that matter), and really appreciate. Grammar and spelling is good, and I actually am adoring the Drarry hints, since most smut I read has some kind of deeper feeling underneath. Call me a hopeless romantic, but while mindless sex and hate sex are all well and good, I love a love undercurrent. Intensely dirty acts just get that much better when done with someone you love. Nice job.
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September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*bows down and worships the goddess of awesome smut fic* Oh man WHY isn't my wife home to pounce on? WHY?
Back at the chapter where you mentioned that you took suggestion requests I had double penetration, fisting, and spanking on the list for when I got to the end, since I wasn't stopping mid story to review, but then you wrote all of them before I could ask, so THANK YOU!
The Daddy kink was a surprising one for me. I really REALLY hate anything sexual that involves children with adults, especially where the adult tries to play off child molestation as something normal that the child should love to do. But having Draco be more than old enough to consent, (in fact instigate the interaction) and willing to voice his desires and then have Lucius RESPOND to those desires and do everything in his power to take care of his son's needs, while at the same time he also discovers his own... there was no squick factor at all for me, it was extremely hot and very well written and I would love to read more of this interaction for both of them.
I know you said you are trying so hard to keep plot out of this and what I'm going to ask for isn't plot per se, honest. I want to see Lucius getting more heavily involved with both boys, and incorporating himself to the point where that warmth does envelop him too would be a welcome thing, like asking Draco to be wearing something special and waiting in his Daddy's arm chair with a book he wants to be read, or exploring more of Harry's slutty submissive side, maybe tie Harry to the bed in a chastity device and leave him in Draco's care for the day, not letting Draco or Harry come until Lucius returns a few hours later and takes Harry at his leisure. Laying down and having the boys worship him completely before they are even allowed to kiss each other. More falling asleep in Lucius' arms and waking up that way too. That kinda thing.
but most of all, Harry kneeling by the side of Lucius' armchair plugged, bound and having his hair stroked while Draco is being read a story in his Daddy's lap with a cock up his bum and his nipples and cock being played with.
I want more Lucius time pretty pretty pretty PLEASE.
oh and by the way I am putting this in my Rec reading list just so I can easily find it again, this gem is NOT getting away!
Back at the chapter where you mentioned that you took suggestion requests I had double penetration, fisting, and spanking on the list for when I got to the end, since I wasn't stopping mid story to review, but then you wrote all of them before I could ask, so THANK YOU!
The Daddy kink was a surprising one for me. I really REALLY hate anything sexual that involves children with adults, especially where the adult tries to play off child molestation as something normal that the child should love to do. But having Draco be more than old enough to consent, (in fact instigate the interaction) and willing to voice his desires and then have Lucius RESPOND to those desires and do everything in his power to take care of his son's needs, while at the same time he also discovers his own... there was no squick factor at all for me, it was extremely hot and very well written and I would love to read more of this interaction for both of them.
I know you said you are trying so hard to keep plot out of this and what I'm going to ask for isn't plot per se, honest. I want to see Lucius getting more heavily involved with both boys, and incorporating himself to the point where that warmth does envelop him too would be a welcome thing, like asking Draco to be wearing something special and waiting in his Daddy's arm chair with a book he wants to be read, or exploring more of Harry's slutty submissive side, maybe tie Harry to the bed in a chastity device and leave him in Draco's care for the day, not letting Draco or Harry come until Lucius returns a few hours later and takes Harry at his leisure. Laying down and having the boys worship him completely before they are even allowed to kiss each other. More falling asleep in Lucius' arms and waking up that way too. That kinda thing.
but most of all, Harry kneeling by the side of Lucius' armchair plugged, bound and having his hair stroked while Draco is being read a story in his Daddy's lap with a cock up his bum and his nipples and cock being played with.
I want more Lucius time pretty pretty pretty PLEASE.
oh and by the way I am putting this in my Rec reading list just so I can easily find it again, this gem is NOT getting away!
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August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
too yummy~!
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August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
blinks and exhales slowlly
wow, super kink, super kink, they're super kinky. (to the music of super freaky)
hot, very, very hot.
wow, super kink, super kink, they're super kinky. (to the music of super freaky)
hot, very, very hot.
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May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I haven't been this turned on by a fic in a long time. You're a very talented writer. I couldn't stop reading this.
The characters are great and the amount of detail is perfect.
Please write more!
The characters are great and the amount of detail is perfect.
Please write more!
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May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is incredibly hot. Please, I need more chapters soon. This is brilliant. And I do hope that you but in some dominance like Lucius has been fantasising about, cause that would be bloody awesome.
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May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so, it's possible to cum with a ring on?... or did they take it off?
at any rrate, Harry, you kinky lil cock slut you. Will Draco be playing bottem any time soon? Harry might need a bit of recovery time. :P
at any rrate, Harry, you kinky lil cock slut you. Will Draco be playing bottem any time soon? Harry might need a bit of recovery time. :P
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May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this was fucking sexy. harry's such a slut, i love it.
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May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
your story, do as you will with it. We'll sit back and salivate. ;D
Still, the chapter warnings are a good idea. certainly wouldn't want to scare your readers. i wold ahve that that after the Durleys abuse he wouldn't want more... or maybe that's left a craving in him. Hmmmm.
Still, the chapter warnings are a good idea. certainly wouldn't want to scare your readers. i wold ahve that that after the Durleys abuse he wouldn't want more... or maybe that's left a craving in him. Hmmmm.
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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i think this story gets hotter with every chapter.