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for An Unlikely Desire

by KJmom827

schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hehehe you are spoiling me, two updates in a day. THANK YOU! bathtimes next? I seriously love every part of this story.
schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes, an update! And 2 new chapters no less! The Healer Harry bit was especially hot. Keep it up!
schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
frowns at Har for not staying in character... and draco was doing so well.
schedule September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is actually the best, sexiest, most well written story on here!
i really hope you keep writing :)
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is the hottest story I've ever read. That is all.
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*drools all over keyboard*

so fantastically wonderful that im going to read it again and again til you update

XD

Grace
schedule September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very lovely and hot, this made my whole day a million times better, thank you! This was deliciously fun and kinky, and no the Lucius scenes did NOT disappoint at all, in fact I was extremely glad to see it. I'm also glad that you liked some of my ideas and I can't wait to see which ones you will incorporate and how. I am very much looking forward to that.

As for sounding, I would equate it to about the same, or even slightly more sensitive to the feeling of having something inserted into a vagina. Anal insertion is not nearly as sensitive as Urethral insertion, since the penis has far more nerve endings than an anus. And a lot of insertion enthusiasts I know (in addition to sounds and several other items) really enjoy a length of small beads slowly inserted just like you would insert anal beads or ben-wa balls and then masturbate with them in. a friend of mine even bought a length of pearls and cut one side so he had a nice length, some of which he inserted and the rest he wound around and decorated his cock and balls with. I have to admit the effect was lovely.

Since you don't seem to be skittish or easily offended, (you swore you couldn't be squicked so I'm trusting you on that) for more information on any kink you could possibly imagine, (And a few I guarantee you have probably never even thought possible) I highly recommend checking out and joining fetlife. com. It's a friendly and safe (NOT WORK SAFE) site for enthusiasts of any fetish where people can talk, share, discuss, and ask questions freely from people who actually DO the kind of stuff we write about, or in some cases write about the stuff they do. There is a group for Sounding and Urethral insertion, and more then one for daddy kink, bondage, several types of different kinds of submission, servitude, and probably anything else you could get asked about writing in the course of your stories. I have found it an invaluable asset and resource in the past, and I hope you do too. I am a member there, under the same name as here if you want to look me up.

I am eager to read more from you, in fact I think I shall check out your profile to see what else I can get into to tide me over till the next lovely chapter. see you soon. ^_^
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ok, first off, the smut is hot! like very very, great job. and the little hint of somethign extra that keeps sneaking in just makes it more intense i think, gives it more feeling. can't wait to see what else you come up with for these three :)
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
0.0 so hot... so hot i'm being baked merely from reading... so goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood. *peers at you More?
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I got to re-read this entire loveliness today and I enjoyed it just as much as the first time. (Wife was thankfully home for pouncing though) I did have an idea, see if you like it.

The practice of Sounding, aka the practice of implementing thin rods or tubes that come in an assortment of lengths, widths, and shapes that are designed to slide down the slit of the penis in order to achieve urethra stimulation, stretching, orgasm control, prostate stimulation, cock decoration, forcing a flaccid cock to remain in a semi-erect state, and even cock torture when mixed with bondage. It's one of my favorite kinks and it's hardly ever used in fanfiction that I've seen. I'd love to see it if you're up for it.