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for His White Queen: A Prequel

by jsu1660n

schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dun dun dun!!!!!

Hahaha, Moody (aka: Barty Crouch Jr.) is starting to suspect Hermione!!! XD
Aw, and I love the H/H fluff. X3 And the school is starting to suspect Hermione is a whore. . .or something, idk, lol. Or that she's just being awoken sexually. :)

Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! Looking forward to reading the next! Though, I don't know why Hermione won't read Moody's mind.
schedule May 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice update, though was hoping to see an elaborated version of what was in the original, unless that is coming later. I so love seeing a Dark Hermione. Keep up the good work.
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn poor ipod! xD I wonder does this bring a new meaning to internal debate? lol
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! This is way more interesting than what happened in the movie and book xD
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
youngest Weasley child: Secured.
Awesome snake familiar: Check!
Meira family memories and vamp capable of flight: double check! lol

Great chapter to an awesome story!
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ron is such a virgin xD lol but that chapter was hmm intense in it's own way XD Keep it up i look forward to reading the next one!
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lol Snape jaw-dropping is a must see XD damn Malfoy won't know what hit him! Nor will the other professors!

I kinda feel bad for Meira loosing her lover like that and well having to put up with that fucked up type of person who has the gall to call himself her father... I'm off to rage now!


Can't wait for the next installment! Thanks for the awesome read and for linking me here!
schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice update. Though I am curious if you will be elaboriting more on the scenes discribed in the original 'His White Queen'
schedule May 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love how you make Grindewald such a bastard. :3

Also, Hermione's attitude change is wonderful. Maturity at its finest.