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for His White Queen: A Prequel

by jsu1660n

schedule July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm diggin this keep up the awesome story...........
schedule July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story for a very long time, almost since the beginning, I suppose. So I decided I absolutely must review, because it's trully one of the best if not the best story I have read in a while. I have this strange fascination with Tom Riddle, and the way you show him is no less than perfect. My compliments on this great story as I am waiting for more chapters. I hope you will post them soon :)
schedule July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great story, well writen, and beliveable, the only thing i hate was the ron bashing, he save harry life many times, he saved hermione life, he there to make you feel better when you sad, so there a lot good about ron, and hermioen should have been a adult and told the truth.
schedule June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Actually (I just read this chapter two days ago at work) Harry learns about the dragons right before the meeting with Sirious. It actually almost makes him late for the meeting, in fact. Great chapter, as always. And of course, I love the jealous Ginny. :3
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Apparently someone doesn't like the french very much lol
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. :3
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!!
schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AAAARGH. I love this story so damn much! Its even better than the first one! And your chapters are so lovely and long. More!!! Can't wait for the next one!
schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hip hip a new chapter! This one was a great addition. I really love seeing how M and H's personalities merge....and I have to say I love a badass Hermione. I'm really interested to explore this attraction she has to Harry because he has a bit of Tom in him. Nice twist. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Great work!
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved 'his white queen' and I'm loving this too. Look forward to more!