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August 11, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Read this about a million times, and love it every time!!
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March 17, 2019 at 12:00 AM
I have read this story so many times and I still love it!
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January 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I've read it so many times! Please update soon!
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September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and really hope that you will continue it
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August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!!
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July 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is my favourite story. I Don't know how many times I have read it. The plot is really interesting and I love the way Tom and Meira are portrayed. Tom is still the ruthless Dark Lord, even though he has fallen in love with someone and Meira can be just as ruthless due to her childhood, yet she can also be caring and loving to those who are loyal and care for her such as Barty and Ginny. I also adore the part of Grindelwald being her father; it made the story very dramatic and shows the reason why Meira is as she is.
However, some parts of the story were unclear as you did not clarify. It is not told what happened to Linnet, or what happened to Jonathan after Guinevere's death; did he not protect her? And whatever did Grindelwald do when Meira did not return after the 2 day time limit; was that the part where Dumbledore detached him? I have had to draw conclusions on these matters myself as you did not include these issues in the story.
I don't really like the way Dumbledore is portrayed as "evil." I admit it is really clever to turn the tables like that, but I reallywasnot fond of it. Also, it seemed as if Dumbledorwe truly did care for Meira at the beginning but diminished after she went off with Tom.
Overall, one of the best stories I have ever read and a personal favourite. Very well- written and amazing use of expression and vocabulary . Extremely Sorry for the long review and if I have offended you in any way whatsoever.
However, some parts of the story were unclear as you did not clarify. It is not told what happened to Linnet, or what happened to Jonathan after Guinevere's death; did he not protect her? And whatever did Grindelwald do when Meira did not return after the 2 day time limit; was that the part where Dumbledore detached him? I have had to draw conclusions on these matters myself as you did not include these issues in the story.
I don't really like the way Dumbledore is portrayed as "evil." I admit it is really clever to turn the tables like that, but I reallywasnot fond of it. Also, it seemed as if Dumbledorwe truly did care for Meira at the beginning but diminished after she went off with Tom.
Overall, one of the best stories I have ever read and a personal favourite. Very well- written and amazing use of expression and vocabulary . Extremely Sorry for the long review and if I have offended you in any way whatsoever.
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May 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@15 omg I love this story!! Please please update. I love hermione goes dark stories. There are not enough written in my opinion.
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November 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story and would love to find out what happens next. The relationship between Hermione and Tom is fascinating, please continue writing
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November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This fic is a real gem. It took a little time to get into because of the OOC Hermione moments and the fact that she looks to be a bit of a mary sue, but I really enjoyed it. I think that the way you write her is going to become better and better as the fic goes on and as the plot gets darker and more twisty. She'll fit in perfectly with the AU you're crafting.
Hope to see more soon!
Hope to see more soon!
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September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can only say: Wow, you have to finish this one :D It's very good and it's different from others.
Though Hermione's "transformation" from Mione to Meira went a little too fast.
But I love it :D
Though Hermione's "transformation" from Mione to Meira went a little too fast.
But I love it :D