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for Our Little Norrie

by AikawaAkihiko

person Koizumi Romi
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Probably the next thing to happen would be to bring a bit more of the plot into the story. Perhaps more Weasleys or even Dumbledore should turn up to visit, or maybe Harry/Norrie should come into his inheritance.

And put Harry/Norrie in a collar! Hot damn!
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
poor harry, he's not going to be able to look ron in the face ever again lmao. and him with the twins is just hotness. as for next, well the three of them are going to have to come out of the storage room eventually, to ron's upset pouting, and then they have to go back home, where there's a couch and a bed and a table and floors and walls and a bathtub, i'm sure you can figure out something to do with those convenient props ;) keep up the great work :)
person angelic_angel
schedule October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Do a Chapter where Harry seduce them!!!:):)
schedule October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn, i know you said he'd be oc but he's really just letting them get away with leaving with the wolf... or in this case ron weasley? It's no fun if he's got no spine at all and if he;s theirs they're supposed to be looking out for him, neh?
schedule October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very, very hot. You could always have the twins tie him to the bed for the day - give Norrie a sick day - and come upstairs on frequent breaks to have their wicked way with him.
person Samibear
schedule October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How bout some bondage and maybe have severus Snape somewhere in there. Also are u just going to have different scenes or are you going to have dumbledore discover where harry is ant stuff
schedule October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story, can't wait to see what you come up with next ;)

Oh, and I always like to thank someone who pays attention to spelling and grammar. I think there were a few mistakes, but not so that it was distracting or confusing.

Keep up the great writing!
schedule September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love me some twins :D great story so far, nice little kink thrown in there two. poor ron, doesn't stand a chance lol. hope to see more of this, i like it so far, keep up the good work :)
person Vitt
schedule September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please updates this soon i love it
schedule September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm missing you and this story. PLEASE update SOON!!!!!!