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for Trial by Fire

by sazsazzel

schedule November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Volderdore and Dumblemort. snickers. that's great. looks like i missed a chappie. pooh.
Ah well, the dada proff doesn't really surprise me (they seem to have a habit of being odd... or treacherous.) but minnie did surprise me. Hallo, pair of Phoenix here. It should have been a 'well dah' option. shrugs.
I'm glad Mio came around and played a part in making a difference.
Now they just need to find someone un biased to raise the pair of ex dark lords. probably be best to keep who they are under wraps, but make DAMN sure that they are well cared for in a benevolent environment. Might be wise to send them to a different wiz school too. They and Hogwarts have some unfortunate history and we don't want any future past flashes or dejavu moments happening.
person djaddict
schedule November 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ack!! Evil author!! What a cliffie!!!

More please!!! lol
person Anon
schedule November 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Those BLEEEEEEPING "women" i shall kill them for hurting Sev... i hope they die slowly. Anyways Awesome story so far u write so well that i feel like im liveing it( hence my first sentence sorry bout that btw lol.) Cant wait for more updates im addicted to this story
person Rosealynne
schedule November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome first chapter. U caught my attention right away like any good author(tho it does help that it is SS/HP :)] Keep up the good work 10/5 stars so far off to chap 2 wonder what hps creature is...
person Rosealynne
schedule November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter.. i love how u had sev tending to the garden in muggle jeans :)
person Saphirephoenix
schedule November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are evil!
person jean
schedule November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please please hurry..need to know what happen to sev..oh. where remy and tonks..*pouts* more soon please
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is incredible!!
schedule August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
eye twitching... such a mild reaction. i would have thought he'd've brought on full body twitching. :P
yay, mio has come round and the phoenix houses are active. ^^
schedule August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hmm wonder who the traitors are.... ron is prob one. the other not sure. Hermione is smart to go back to harry. Ron always was too whiny for my tastes.