AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Trial by Fire

by sazsazzel

person lemondropfan64
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I must say that I experienced a bit of trepidation as to what I had caused when you said to blame to the new cliffie on me....but I will gladly be responible for the fact that one of my favorite characters has shown up. <3 Dobby <3 Even if we don't know what mayhem he'll cause (because its inevitable, he always does!) Congrats on finding your Gryffindor side and updating quickly! (or maybe its your Slytherin side realizing that was the best way to avoid the mass of scheming readers? hmmm.)

Regardless, I must admit to being highly curious as to what this whole Phoenix Lord thing will mean for Harry? Will it make beating the Obsessed Snake and the Old Goat easier? Will it mean another prophecy (or at least one, depending on how far from canon you're heading)? Will it mean we get to meet more Phoenixes? and will the be as awesome as Fawkes??? And speaking of the fireball, will Sev and Harry ever get some privacy?????
person lemondropfan64
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Let's see, it didn't seem to post my whole review last time, so lets try again. Even if we don't know what mayhem he'll cause (because its inevitable, he always does!) Congrats on finding your Gryffindor side and updating quickly! (or maybe its your Slytherin side realizing that was the best way to avoid the mass of scheming readers? hmmm.)

Regardless, I must admit to being highly curious as to what this whole Phoenix Lord thing will mean for Harry? Will it make beating the Obsessed Snake and the Old Goat easier? Will it mean another prophecy (or at least one, depending on how far from canon you're heading)? Will it mean we get to meet more Phoenixes? and will the be as awesome as Fawkes??? And speaking of the fireball, will Sev and Harry ever get some privacy?????
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH I knew it! I knew it! I really love tht bird!

Really good job! :)
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really good so far. It is so refreshing that SS and HP don't hate each other and have to go through that first. And having the ties to LV taken away leaves the story wide open to go anywhere. Looking forward to seeing where you take it. p
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your Fawkes cracks me up. I think he has been listening to Dumbles too long and is just plain giddy with excitement. Excellent! p
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What's so shocking about purple? I like purple!
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Man your sense of humour is quirky.
... humble servent my arse. More like court jester.
Sev's right. For a phoenix Fawlks does have VERY muggle tastes and I thought you said 'no more evil cliffies'! *quotes and points finger at you.
'message complete.'
person sm
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooo... look at the pretty rainbow. More please. Please...
person Orkchild
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the story can't wait for more. I've always thought that Fawkes is an under used character.
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG Great great story! I can't wait for more!!
I'm very interested!
Love Fawkes!! and Harry & Sev are great!!
What's the purple mean?????