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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the idea and the story is great so far.
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi - neat premise.
I would enjoy it if you let harry stay long enough in the past to at least see how he interacts with draco, hermione, ron, snape and dumbledore. Since he doesnt know how to dose the time turner properly - it seems weird that he could then later (after only one try) go back to the correct times to fix all the other little things.
I think it would be just as good if he had to repeat the entire time (in abbreviated form I guess) with his more adult mind and the memories he has of everyone. I mean.. he could fix some problems (maybe..) but there would be OTHER problems then and he wouldn't be able to do anything about it until he got back to the moment of the age he was when he went back (or stole another time turner somehow)
And he would then.. essentially - to all effects and purposes be somewhere in his twenties mentally if he accidentally went back again...
Anyway - its an interesting start. I'll follow this no matter where you take it.
I would enjoy it if you let harry stay long enough in the past to at least see how he interacts with draco, hermione, ron, snape and dumbledore. Since he doesnt know how to dose the time turner properly - it seems weird that he could then later (after only one try) go back to the correct times to fix all the other little things.
I think it would be just as good if he had to repeat the entire time (in abbreviated form I guess) with his more adult mind and the memories he has of everyone. I mean.. he could fix some problems (maybe..) but there would be OTHER problems then and he wouldn't be able to do anything about it until he got back to the moment of the age he was when he went back (or stole another time turner somehow)
And he would then.. essentially - to all effects and purposes be somewhere in his twenties mentally if he accidentally went back again...
Anyway - its an interesting start. I'll follow this no matter where you take it.
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A new twist... I love it. Good work, don't change a thing.
5-turns = 5-years / should last 5months... yes? And I would think he would just rebound, you know, like a boomarang.
I always think, "wouldn't it be nice to go back in time, knowing what I know now, able to make better choices and a better life", then I remember that there are things in my life that I wouldn't give up for the world, the little things that make a life such as my own worth staying alive for.
Is what we would gain worth what we will lose? PLEASE update soon ;b
5-turns = 5-years / should last 5months... yes? And I would think he would just rebound, you know, like a boomarang.
I always think, "wouldn't it be nice to go back in time, knowing what I know now, able to make better choices and a better life", then I remember that there are things in my life that I wouldn't give up for the world, the little things that make a life such as my own worth staying alive for.
Is what we would gain worth what we will lose? PLEASE update soon ;b
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh oh... soooooooooooooooo much potential for damage!
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very good beginning. Please continue
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really think that maybe Harry arrived at that point to have the opportunity to be friends with Draco or may be more but its purpose was to save you follow him to Sirius I welcome the introduction.
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think you've got a gem here. With All Erased seems to have quite a lot of potential, and I really look forward to following Harry's journey. I kind of got rather sappy when Harry was in the robe shop, remembering all the sweet little things that had been long forgotten... I would like to see how things go with Draco and the Gryffindors, as well as what happens to make the boys fall for one another... Whatever the outcome, I'll be reading. Happy shipping. ^_^