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for With All Erased

by Pheobi

schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! i'm curious as to how this pans out. :)
person Snuffle007
schedule May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting story. I mean, who wouldn't want to go back and change things from their past if given the chance? I know I would! And with all the Shit Harry has been through, he especially would want to change things...mainly to save Sirius as with him he felt like he had a family that loved him for the first time. I certainly don't blame him. The business with Draco and Lucius is interesting. He is trying to give them other options. I mean, neither seem to be whole heartedly following Voldemort. With Harry being in Draco's life so early and in a positive way, maybe they will make different choices and maybe things will be better for them. Problem is, Harry has no clue what the consquences of all this will be. Small changes in our past can drastically change our futures in ways we cannot conceive. I totally agree that the sorting hat would put him in slytherin. He is being very selfish for the first time in his life...what a way to do it!!!! Loving this story so far...keep up the good work!!!
person Serrikan
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic plot. Great story developing, can't wait for the next update. Thanks for taking the time to write this.
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oops, really Harry, you should have figured mucking with timr and being manipulative would have some effects... sstill, it might be easier to get Snapr on side now. ehehe :S
person helewisetran
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay. interesting storyline. i agree that Harry should go to Slytherin. All those plotting and manipulating is unfit for a Gryfindor. Anyway, great work. update soon.
person JC Black
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter the hat done the right thing with Harry in Slytherin..."
he can get away with more.
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
interesting... please continue
person silveririses
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHH! Definately keep going, definately.
schedule April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You should definitely continue this story, its a good start. I'm curious as to what will happen next. Please update soon.
person petalsoft
schedule April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this start. I've read other fictions of Harry and Draco starting as friends, but never one where Harry already knew what was going to happen in the future and wanted to change things.

I look forward to more:)