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I was so glad to see another post from you and I certainly am enjoying this little PWP. :)

I look forward to more of this lovely little story.

I like it! Its sweet and well written and quite hot in places. Its a cute, fairly novel idea.

Added it to the 'check back' list. ;-)

VERY interesting twist. I've been waiting for this story forever - was so exciting to see it tonight! Very, very sexy - some of your best smut, especially that astride scene in the chair. Ain't no shame in a PWP!

OMG you are a genius! I love that you made Lucius into the prude in this story - SO many authors make him into a debauched sex god, this is like a breath of fresh air. Also, I ADORE marriage law fics of all kinds, so you have me on that count as well. Can't wait to read the rest!

I [b]LOVE[/b] IT! This is such a nice change from Hermione being the prude and inexperienced and Lucius being the Casanova. It's incredibly entertaining. I laughed really hard from the images of Ron feigning work to rest his balls. Keep up the good work.

Very interesting to have Lucius be the prude one. It makes sense though. Ron being worn out by Hermione was great. Love that he cried about having sex so much...hehehe. I adore your work. I was so excited to see a new one from you. Can't wait for more

I think you are under estimating the potential of this story. I would like to see the reaction of the Ministry, especially Kingsley and Percy, when their little "3 per week" spell shows how well Hermione is taking care of her wizard. They may need a little anti-green monster potion. Maybe with her free time she could promote marriage therepy for pureblood witches. If she could alleviate their Victorian prude view point of sex, she would probably increase the birth rate. Not to mention, there would be a lot of tired wizards who won't have the energy to get into mischief, like thinking of stupid new laws. Also, Draco and Ron deserve to have the Ministry see they are "happily" married since they are both purebloods and all. Teach them to laugh at our Hermione. As always, your stories are a joy to read.

I'm wondering if Lucius is the prude...my curiousity is piqued

it looks so bad to have to click "review the prude" hahaha
anyways...
love your stories, i read most of them a while back, hoping you make a part two for doll house ;)
i really like the idea of the fic, i'll keep in check to see where it goes
sorry if my english is bad, it's not my first language

I rather like the idea of a Lucius with little experience--think of all the lovely, naughty things he could be taught! I'm sure you will, I have great faith in you, LOL. I haven't been hanging out on AFF much lately, so it was a nice surprise to see your story up. I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of it.