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for The Prude

by soldiersgirl0709

person Rini
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hermione the Debaucherer and Lucius the Prude. I love it! I didn't know what to expect when you said not to have the usual expectations but this was definitely not anywhere near where I thought you would go.

You know, I actually think the prude Lucius might even be more sexy (and adorable) than the sexually confident one. And I'm loving Hermione and I even find myself liking Ron, who I usually quite dislike. Percy's a twat as per usual; I hope he gets his just desserts.

Can't wait for more!

Rini
person courtn3388
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was sooo not expecting this!! I was honestly expecting Ms Granger to be the prude and was pleasantly surprised to find the opposite!! Please update soon I can't wait to see how things unfold between our lovers!!
person Smurphy
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chap!!!! I love how hermione is chipping away at luci's sense of propriety one sexual escapade at a time!!! Love it and I love that Draco and Severus kinda caught them!!!!

Yay congrats sg a wedding!!!! I can't wait to hear all of the details
person sue
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy for you and your upcoming wedding. I remember a few years ago the pain you were going through and now love has found you and you sound soo happy, busy, hectic but blissfully happy. I am a selfish fan of yours so take this with all the love I have for your writing---For gods sake don't forget us and does your entended know how your muse works? All the best of everthing is what I wish for you!!!!!
person Lizski
schedule April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heehee! I always love me some good Lucius smut, and my Lucius and Hermione are still a little skittish around each other (they're getting there, and they will get there, but my two are being a little stubborn...), so I'm living vicariously through yours! ;-) Keep 'em coming! (And yes, I totally meant it to sound that way! *grin*)
person KellyJCR
schedule April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Congrats on the wedding. I'm so thrilled for you! You desrve all the happiness in the world. Did you ever think you may be a closet exhibitionist? You just love Hermione and her cohorts getting caught in the act. (Well considering the quality of said cohorts who wouldn't want a peek.) I find it hysterical that Lucius can't get over his bodies reaction to Hermione. He has years of sexual suppression stored up. I'm begining to think we haven't even tapped into the passion he's going to find or the power struggle that I think inevitably will follow. Hermione may have created a monster and I'm not sure she would be willing to give up the upper hand in the bedroom. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next. Well done and congrats again girlie!!!!
person makaem
schedule April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you bought Snape back. As always, this was perfect.
person Gertie
schedule April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First things first- Congratulations on your engagement!!! I am so very happy for you. You deserve good things.

Poor poor Lucius, to have his entire world put on it's head. It was lovely to throw a little Severus in there at the end. Of course I wouldn't mind a whole lot more. Let the flood gates open!! Momma needs more!
person apkblack
schedule April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome to have you back and awesome to read that you're planning your wedding.

Whether this is just fluffy time-fill for you or serious writing, either way, it's delightful.
schedule April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW, I totally missed that!!! Congratulations!!!!!!! I am happy for you. I am in the middle of wedding planning for my sister, so I know some of what you're going through. Enjoy the whole process, hon, even the stressful parts. :-)

Oh, that was fun, funny and sexy. Thank you! That little horndog just can't keep to herself for a few hours. lol And, poor lost Lucius. How he suffers... LMAO! Seriously though, a part of me does feel a bit sorry for him in his complete confusion and the dismembering of all he knows. She needs to show him about intimacy, too. I think that'll blow his mind; the idea that two people could be close, talk, and be intimate without actual sex. He woouldn't know what to do with himself. lol I can't wait to see what else you come up with for this tale. :-) Thanks again! HG4eva