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for The Prude

by soldiersgirl0709

person Rini
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was a nice ending... but can't wait for you to add to it :)

Have a safe journey!
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue Epilogue Epilogue...... Please.............. That was sweet and wonderful.
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely trilled to see the update as usual, I just love your stories:-)) Have a wonderful time in Calefornia and make sure to think of new and interesting plot while you are there:-))
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, hon! That was sweet, fun, interesting and hot! Yes, it was short, but you said it would be, so who am I to complain? lol I got a great story! The idea was original (hard to do in this fandom) and you followed it through REALLY well. But, I must say, I am thrilled you plan to add more. ;-) Thanks again and have a fun trip to CA! HG4eva
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome! It was a wonderful twist on the what I normally read of this couple. Thanks for coming back and giving the readers more of your magical story telling. Please write more when you can.
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a fantastic tale you wove here! I love the thought of Lucius being the prude, with his upbringing it makes sense. Love it!
person colao
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loved it and I'll read anything you do to it at a later time
schedule May 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that was sooo HOT!!!! I am loving this story with Lucius being the inexperianced sexual partner and Hermoine being the teacher.

This turn about is making for some very HOT and HORNY scenes. Lucius' perspective of how he becomes a prisoner to Hermoine's passions is AWESOME!!!

More, please!!
person mageemi
schedule May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new story from S_G. I was so excited to find this and also Thawing the Ice Queen, both very, very HOT!. I have not been checking in at AFF that often lately, but after re-reading one of my faves by you over at GE, (Shadows of the Past) I decided to come over here to re-read Girl Talk and lo and behold I found some new fics! Glad to see you posting fic, you are one of my fave writers. I loved the fact that you turned things around in this one and made Lucius the prude, I suspected that might be the way you would go when the summary mentioned an intersting twist. Looking forward to more!
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic!!! I can almost not believe my luck. It has been a while since I visited this archive, having to many wips on other archives and just didn't take the time to look here to. But, when I did, I did so looking for some of your stories I didn't find over at GE, and not only did I find that hot oneshot that is the counterpart to this one, I found this gem of a story too. You write brilliantly as always and I am so happy that you continue to do so. I love the plot in this, even if you call it a pwp, your Lucius is so intriguing, and I love to see Hermione make him all hot and sexy. I am very much looking forward to read more of this!!!