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for The Prude

by soldiersgirl0709

person Joanie
schedule April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see a new story by you tonight, made my whole month better. I love your Lucius, with the wizarding world being very Victorian based its actually seems an apt description. Hermione has a very modern outlook which promises lots of enjoyment. I cannot wait to see her "corrupt" Lucius for a change
person Narcissas sister
schedule April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I didn't think you had a chance at making Lucius a believable prude. Needless to say I was mistaken. The unusual banter between the boys is adorable. Glad to see you back for a short time. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us. Well done!!!!
schedule April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I simply LOVE the way you blow off steam and de-stress. lol This is a great twist on the norm and I am REALLY happy that you have already completed it. :-) Lucius as the sexual innocent.... LOVE IT! Welcome back, hon; you were missed! Thank you, HG4eva
person Nightqueen
schedule April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can I just tell you how much I have missed you!!! I've missed you more than words can say!! I hope Grad school is going well! I remember those days very well! If this is an exercise in venting your frustrations or just needing to relax I have to tell I feel privileged being on the receiving end of it. This story is terrific fun! I absolutely love seeing Lucius this way he's completely endearing! Hermione is wonderful and down right funny and the sex hot, passionate and most of all playful! Welcome back and I look forward to the next chapter!!!
schedule April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Such a unique take on things, not to mention that you have a very, very dirty mind. I mean that in the absolute best way possible, of course ;)