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for The Prude

by soldiersgirl0709

person emo44
schedule November 11, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Omg, that was some funny shit! I would love to know what made you think to make Lucius The Prude? Every story I've ever read with this theme, Hermione is always the inexperienced one. Oh what fun this story should be. I'm looking forward to it. The wizarding world is backwards as fuck!

person emo44
schedule November 11, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Draco s a nosy little bastard isn't he? Getting Potter and Weasley drunk to get information out of them, they probably would've given it freely, finding it funny. There discussion was illuminating. Lmao. 

Lucius is in for the ride of his life, quite literally. Oh this is a great story, so outside of the box for me. I love it.

person emo44
schedule November 11, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Oh, this story is so delightful 

person emo44
schedule November 11, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Hermione is so very playful and naughty. I really love this story.

person emo44
schedule November 11, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Fun story. I got a good laugh at some of this. You write sex very well. Kudos. Thank you for sharing your imagination and time.

schedule November 25, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Really loved this! 

schedule December 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Aww...I love this! Great writing. 

schedule August 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love the twist on this one. I'm a devoted fan of your writing btw. What I wouldn't do with an inexperienced Lucius Malfoy. ❤️

schedule November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can confidently say that is my all-time favorite fic on this site (I always come back to this story when I'm being fussy and I can't find a good L/H fic.) I'm more of a Dr/H shipper, but I definitely enjoy some L/H and this story just always does it for me! Your writing is fantastic and the dialogue is just spot on. I love the idea of Lucius being a prude, and you wrote it so well that it's now hard for me to think of him in any other way. If you ever decide to add on to this story, you've got yet another loyal reader awaiting an update! I also would not complain if you decided to just write another L/H fic... you know, for fun... :)
person Jo
schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I know that the way you portrayed Lucius in your store isn't how the character is usually written, but it is a wonderful story. It is light and fluffy, with a good amount of smut, and a wonderful happy ending. It is a nice pick me up or change from the norm. Thanks. :)