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for Semblance of Normality

by Ladylala04

person Anon
schedule May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohhh this is getting really interesting can't wait for the next chapter!!!
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!! What exactly DID Ron say?!?!?!?!? I have a feeling from the snippets that Harry DID hear, that it could be juice. It could even make Harry VERY HAPPY...I can only hope!

You are such a tease...but I like that in a writer. Just so long as you come back and put some action behind the teasing.
schedule April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like Harry's humor in this. The way you took the plot from the series and layered Harry's longing into it worked out really well. You made it all sound perfectly logical. And I could see Ginny as being an ideal stand-in for both of his mates with their various traits rolled into one.

But I really liked how pleased Harry is with his Junior Auror business cards. It shows how simple and sweet he still is, regardless of his complicated love life. I can see Harry being attracted to both, actually. People like to point to canon as justification that Harry never had any amorous feelings towards Hermione, but honestly, I think JKR was just trying too hard.
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oddly enough i do see Harry having sexual thoughts about Ron in the books but unlike in your story i don't think Ron would feel that way about Harry and i know that Harry and Hermione don't like each other like that.

Still i do imagine that there would have been a part of Harry that has always imagined what it would be like to have Ron inside him (even though he is in love with Ginny). I don't see Harry as being gay, rather i see him as being straight but also being Ronsexual at the same time (meaning Ron is the only guy he has ever thought about shagging).
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the back-story and detailing how long Harry has been in love with his two best friends. Especially the wanking part!!!

Now, bring on the smut!!!

Can you tell, I'm a smut slut ;) *snicker*
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love trio fic. Can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cool! I'm a bit of a trio whore myself, always my favorite grouping. Looking forward to the next chapter.
PS. You can stalk my story anytime. It's a thrill as I'm sure you know to see that someone is reading and enjoying your work. You and Salon_Kitty make my day!
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please, please, please continue!!!!!

The set-up was hot to begin with; I can just imagine that it will get HOTTER as the story plays out.

Please don't leave us hanging too long!
person rayhansd
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Brooding Harry? HaHa love it! I'll be waiting for what happens next. :)
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it, keep going.

I'm a triowhore, so I always get excited when these pop up, which unfortunately are not often enough. I think I've read every plot that is usually utilized for these three, and while yours is hardly original, I do like the way you've set up Harry's thoughts already.

Good start. If you need a quick beta, I'd be happy to help.

I think I've seen you review on What It Comes Down To, which I didn't even realize was a trio story when I started, but so glad I did.