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I absolutely adored this story! I admit, I was worried because they ARE so young in this story but you made it work! They're both awkward but so sexy at the same time XD

I'm glad you added that last chapter. It wrapped it up, showed them returning to before, almost as if they'd forgotten but not quite.

What a great story. I'm very glad I got the chance to read this!
-MooChew

This is lovely. I'm glad you posted it! I agree with what you said about not being able to stand the thought that Severus never got Lily. I like to think that at some point they at least kissed or maybe did a bit more. >;) There needs to be more Sev/Lily fic like this one. :)

I really, really enjoyed this. With them so young and with it being their first time, it did a good job of capturing the essence of curiosity and experimenting. It makes more sense for them to fool around like this than to actually have intercourse. Excellently done! :D

I truly, truly loved reading this.

There was tension, there was hope, there was earnestness, and there was vulnerability. I really appreciated that you stretched out the scenes. Because you did, I was able to better appreciate Severus' feelings. You effectively conveyed the experience of a heart that was tremulous, shivering in fear and desire at the situation in which it found itself entrapped.

Your story is such a pleasant read, both as a piece of light, realism-bent smut mired in dreams and apprehension, and as a piece of literary talent. Plus, given the ending of the last book, this story was also a comfort for me, since it hurt to imagine a character so lonely as Severus.

I truly loved this angle on a sexual encounter between Severus and Lily.

I would absolutely love to read any other scenarios you have or will write about Severus/Lily. I strongly encourage you to keep writing, especially for this pairing since Severus/Lily fics (particularly when the characters are both teenagers) are scarce. If you would like someone to bounce story ideas off of, you can send me a message through FF . net since I think my email is hidden on my AFF profile.

Here's to a new favorite story. :3

Aww. This was a very sweet story, realistic, with both of them in character, and if something like this had actually happened between them, it makes their eventual falling out that much sadder. Nice work!

This was sweet and sexy and very well-written. I especially loved the fact they were shy and awkward. So many fics have a very first kiss progress into full-on sex. Has ANYONE in real life gone from a first-ever kiss to losing their virginity? Not many I think. Too many fics have the person being awesome and knowledgable and skillfull for their first time... Also, I found it very refreshing that Lily had never orgasmed before(a sad but true fact of teenage girl reality-- don't ask how I know that *ahem* *cough, cough* *looks away with shifty eyes*) Good job on being so realistic-- loved it!!

I'll just say that Snape/Lily isn't one of my favorite pairings but this fit them extremely well. Not over the top for 15 year olds having their first sexual experience, but still quite hot. Any chance of seeing more on this timeline? I don;t think anyone could still be "friends" after that.