rate_review Reviews

I find the idea for the story interesting, epecially that I studied Maya hieroglyphic writing for the whole year :D

Ha! I fell off the couch laughing at the last line! Both wizards do have a good reason to be terrified of a "meet the parents" trip.

Nice job of showing a "caring for Hermione" Scarbior. I must admit I was leery of reading after the synopsis but I was pleasantly surprised.

Your OC David was interesting. Not to mention the peek into his relationship with Lisa.

I would love to read this "beefed up" as it were; less rushed feeling. I think it has great potential but it felt like things were glossed over especially in descriptions and why/how Hermione got with Scarbior in the first place. Had he been following/looking for her already? What led to his caring for her, beyond the creepy interest he showed in HP:DH?

Thanks for writing.

Please, please, please write a short of Scabior and Hermione meeting again! I would love to see that.

Oh, I absolutely LOVED the ending. Bill having his own pack. That was a perfect way to have a threesome!!

Also, a very HOT 'mating' and 'marking' scene.

Thank you!!!!!

Oh, the plot thickens!!!

An unaware werewolf mate. A secret lover. And three unknown abductors.

What more could a reader want? Oh, maybe a Bill/Hermoine/Scabior sandwich!?!?!?!?!

More, please!

Please update soon this seems like a great story and I can't wait to read more!:)

Oh, I would know those words anywhere. Say hello to the bad guy, Scarbior.

This is going to get wicked very quickly, I can see that.

I so do hope for a threesome for Hermoine and her 'bad boys'. I am getting hot just thinking about it *fan self*!!!!

Please post again VERY soon!