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May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not bored I loved every second of it! and woohoo hotness scene!
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May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the aftermath.
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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was good. It was awesome and I really enjoyed it. It may have had a lot of dialogue but it answered questions and you got to see how Snape and Harry were communicating and getting along. There was also a lot of progression. The beta move was a really good one- I didn't know you were looking for one. I only spotted one spelling error and that was when you were describing how attractive Snape found the green of Harry's eyes, you used the word greed instead. It was a very good chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next.
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May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nope, dialog is neccissary sometimes. Kind of wonder what Snape's response to the Dursley's treatment of Harry will be though... and the responses of his friends to his new state... I'm sure telling Ginny is gunna be fun. *winces and ducks ahead of time.
Nott deserves maiming a lot.
Nott deserves maiming a lot.
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May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My English can be horrible at times, so bear with me and my comment...
I'm sooo looking forward to next update. So far it has all the things I love most in FF. I only wish for you to write Harry-in-denial and lots of UST. And I want to know how Draco fits in this whole story. Maybe Harry'd attack him, when he won't be able to control his instincts. And then three of my favourite boys form a little coven of their own.
I'm sooo looking forward to next update. So far it has all the things I love most in FF. I only wish for you to write Harry-in-denial and lots of UST. And I want to know how Draco fits in this whole story. Maybe Harry'd attack him, when he won't be able to control his instincts. And then three of my favourite boys form a little coven of their own.
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May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story so far! Keep going!!
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May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
#1) Harry was starved by the Dursley's in canon, but it was mostly brushed over.
#2) Severus is not Draco's godfather in canon, only fandom, in canon Severus and Lucius don't like eachother and Lucius is always making problems for Severus with the dark lord.
#2) Severus is not Draco's godfather in canon, only fandom, in canon Severus and Lucius don't like eachother and Lucius is always making problems for Severus with the dark lord.
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May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chap.#1) GRU-and then some!!! Wow, thank Merlin for Snapes long nights.
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May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chap.#2) Poor Draco and Harry,it seems that the schools resident poster boys for the light and dark are having some real problems.
Good story, enjoy read it, keep up the good work.
Good story, enjoy read it, keep up the good work.
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May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chap.#3) wonder what Severus will do when he finds out 'why' Harry is so thin and small? Hope the change isn't too bad, poor boys been through so much already.
Another wonderful chapter, thank you.
Another wonderful chapter, thank you.