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July 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Quick little chapter, but at least we're getting somewhere. :-]
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June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooo the plot thickens...update soon??? :]
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You write wonderfully. I absolutely love your descriptions and the general feel of the writing and your plot is well put together and plausible. Your characters are well written with the possible exception of Ginny who is kind of OOC but of course it's fanfiction so that's acceptable, though I'd love to see more of an explanation of why she went from the independent and powerful young lady that J.K. Rowling wrote to the clingy girl you portray. Otherwise, well done! I look forward to your updates.
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June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
read to the end of chapter 2 so far and it sounds very very interesting! plus my thoughts on your author's note was along the lines of 'oh how times have changed now that fanfic authors say things like "if you follow me on twitter" since when I was last reading fanfic' - it's been a long while!! Twitter??? lol it never existed back in the day. And I remember reading fics from you about like 3 years ago or something when I used to follow fanfiction more regularly!
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June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great! can't wait to see more from this story! I'm very impressed by the quality and plot development, and you seem to have the balance of emotions down pat! I was quite upset when I got to the end of the last chapter posted that there wasn't more to continue reading!!
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June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Who caresw?I'm not worried.Now *clink*,*clink* ;)
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June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear... no mattewr what happens though, Harry needs to totally curb stomp that bitch. So is NOT ggood for him, no matter how things with Malfoy go down.
What's the process on inherited illegals... are you supposed to trot off the the ministry and go 'um, yeah, i just inherited the title and a bunch of the stuff i inherited scares the cacky out of me. You deal with it.' Yeah, that'd go down good for an ex death eater. :S
What's the process on inherited illegals... are you supposed to trot off the the ministry and go 'um, yeah, i just inherited the title and a bunch of the stuff i inherited scares the cacky out of me. You deal with it.' Yeah, that'd go down good for an ex death eater. :S
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June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #8..
It seems to me the only thing Draco is doing is just selling
the items, nothing wrong with that, if only to make money.
Now, if it were to shady characters..well that's worth saying
something.
It seems to me the only thing Draco is doing is just selling
the items, nothing wrong with that, if only to make money.
Now, if it were to shady characters..well that's worth saying
something.
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June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
shame Draco, you can choose a different life,
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May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. And I do hope that you'll update soon. I know that Draco's an arse, but I kind of feel sorry for him since Harry's just playing with him to get the job done. I do hope that it all works out in the end.