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by Digitallace

person polka dot
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
what happened to no kissing on the first date? harry has already gone over to the dark side.
person Althydia
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I really liked the final twist (and the whole chapter). I think it was more expected that Harry would stop Draco because of his guilty conscience. Also, maybe like this Harry will be drawn even more to Draco, because he will see this as more of a challenge. And if it can make him think about his own life choices and decide on some radical changes (like getting Ginny out of the picture), all the better. :)
Probably my favourite chapter so far. I think I like it best when it's only Harry and Draco, to see the evolution of their relationship and feelings. They have great chemistry together because they are so different (in my opinion), so it's nice to see that they won't change who they are for the other. So, what now? Harry has to stop settling for what's expected of him (e.g. Ginny). After what he went through in his life, he should really try to live life to the fullest, don't you think? (wishful thinking?)
person Spades
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey!

your story is great. i wanted to read the whole thing in one go but also wanted to have it as long a possible. You are a very good writer and I like how you are portraiting the characters.
I hope i will read much more from you in the future.
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yes, yes. you r evil. *poke.
still i can tell you has plaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnsssss. mwahahahaha.
I'll be waiting... lurking... loitering around until you deign to uncover them for us.
poor malfoy. despite the awkward he;s just not going to be able to get harry out of his head. *hums a few bars of 'i just can't get u outta my head.'
person SP777
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #10...

Kill the author! Kill!! Kill!!!

But, despite that, this was a WONDERFUL evening
the two of them had. I was kind of hoping that
they would have held off that kiss, until the
fourth date...but it's all good.

Now, I'm wondering if there was more Draco
wasn't telling.
person automatikjoy
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Scrumptious chapter!! PLease update soon??? I need my drarry fix and only your stories do the job :D
person ice
schedule July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awful, indeed! How utterly wicked of you to stop at such a point. And to have Draco run away, when he pushed for such a passionate kiss! But still, very well written chapter. Please continue and mayhaps....at a faster pace? Please? Either way, I know you have a live so I shall review you the next time a chappie is posted. :D
schedule July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes you are!!! You're awful and mean!!! >< But I still love you!!!!! Sooooo write more sooooooooooooooooooooooon!!! I love the Harry/Draco sexual tension, now I remember why I got into H/D slash!! Thanks too all of your amazing stories!! ♥♥♥
schedule July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
CH(: Poor Harry is so confused and Draco so irresistible... I'm loving this chapter.
schedule July 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
agrees complete with the author note. Can't wait till the ginger cow gets curb stomped. Also, does Harry have a working knowledge of how a gay boy gets it on? Bring on the affor mentioned (previous author note) hot Drarry action.