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Ooh, very nice chapter indeed! I actually loved the fact that it didn't go too easy. It would have been a bit of a let down if they were instantly lovey-dovey and the sex was perfect on their first try (Harry IS a virgin with men after all!). The sex was very hot and passionate, though, quite satisfying. :)
I also love possessive Draco, but I wonder how he'll react when Harry tells him the truth. Isn't it ironic that he thinks the trouble concerns Ginny, when Harry has in fact already decided to break up with her and his real secret could be potentially much worse for Draco (when Harry finally tells him)...? I do hope they find a way to make this relationship work, though. But Draco should be prepared: if they become a couple, I doubt Harry will want to keep it secret forever...
Even though it might bring a rude awakening for Draco (and Harry, depending on Draco's reaction), I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter!

As always Lexx...a very good chapter. Can't wait to read more on Harry and Draco. Who will take over Draco's business? Maybe a type of sting operation to take down the clients of Draco's? I'm glad you didn't make Ron out to be dense. Alot of stories have him pretty oblivious of Harry. Will patiently be waiting for the next upload. Maybe I can get some of my own fic going? lol.

~tas

quite a bit covered here. i think it's sweet that Draco wants to go legit for Harry and that Har is FINALLY giving the ginger the heave ho. And that his friends are happy... well happish for him.

about #12...

Pottermore? Never heard of it..

All in all, I liked this chapter, it's good to see Ron understanding for once.

So there is some progress between Harry and Draco... and it's nice to have Ron so understanding (and Blaise too, by the way!). Hopefully his sister will be too (although it will crush more of her hopes probably).
Now if Harry tells Draco everything about his mission, I hope Draco will do the right thing and confess his father's inherited business, while also confessing that he wants out. This way, he could negociate for the Ministry's protection in exchange of all his dark artifacts... couldn't he? And Harry would probably like it better than discovering Draco's secret by accident.
Well I hope that whatever you decide won't stop their relationship's progress. After all, they still haven't shared much more than a kiss (but a very nice one it was) - it's time they got some action! ;)

snickers.
Draco you big bloody wuss and Harry about frikkin time mate. You've been splashing about in the rivers of Egypt for to long. Ginny might pitch a fit but meh, who cares.

Pity party indeed. Harry needs to get his fighting spirit back soon! I wonder how Draco will react to seeing Harry again? Maybe he'll think it's fate and try again (I wish)? And what if he hears that Harry is going to leave Ginny...
Nice chapter!

I've been waiting with baited breath for this chapter for SO LONG and now I have to wait again? *sigh*
You're breaking my heart..

Kudos on the fic, though. The detail is amazing.

I absolutely adore this story. Please please update soon.

I am dying for more of this story! It's so good! Thank you!