schedule
April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am guessing either Lucius or Severus. Just cause... god that's hot LOL. And the story mentions Lucius taking over in case something happens to Voldemort... and Severus just cause I'm Severus obsessed and Harry seemed happy he lived.
schedule
April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! another writer from aus, I'm can't believe you wrote all night I thought I was the only one the insane :D
By the waay I'm really enjoyingthe story so far so you should post another chappie soon, pleeeease...
lucianne
By the waay I'm really enjoyingthe story so far so you should post another chappie soon, pleeeease...
lucianne
schedule
April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it when Tom is nice to Harry and not being too evil with him. I do have some concerns 1) Snape seems to be a bit angry with Harry. Tom is hopefully not going to push them together. 2) Luc yes I know that he is 2nd in line I hope that Luc don't do anything dumb and try to hurt Harry. I understand why Tom has kept Harry's friends alive. It is to control Harry, Harry does something wrong his friends get hurt simple as that. I do hope that Tom is not the type of person who will pass Harry around, I like a soft Tom in bed someone who will treat Harry with caring and will try not to hurt him.
schedule
April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY, it's more! I understand about wanting more done before you post and the chapters are looking amazing. I personally didn't understand the last sentence in the chapter, but otherwise it was perfectly legible from my point. I'm still trying to figure it out but it looks like you're setting it up to be HP/SS with the way Severus was so passionate with Harry, even if it was anger.
schedule
April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'm hooked can't wait to read the conversion harry's about to have with his friends
schedule
April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No No, No flames. I don't see the point of them. It was an Honest review. And now that i've read ch 2 I understand a bit better. Dumbles is A LIER etc... still, how do you explain the visions of al 'round evilness Harry kept getting and his D E's former prickish atitudes? More Dumbles maniplulation?
About enjoying it. I wouldn't review if it din have my interest.
About enjoying it. I wouldn't review if it din have my interest.
schedule
April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
adding this to my favs. love it
schedule
April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, Harry's pretty easy going especially since he lost the war and is a captive... or maybe a really, really good first screw mellows you?
schedule
April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... interesting story so far! My guess (or hope) is Lucius, since he is, according to this story, to take over if Voldemort dies, and if he becomes the dark lord, he might very well "inherent" the consort... ;)
schedule
April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooh this looks like a fun story. You said you had 4 chapters done, can't wait to read more!