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April 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Story can't wait for the next Chapter.
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March 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!!!
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
L.O.V.E.D. I.T.
I'm gonna rule the world... well, sign me up!! That was painfully H.O.T
congrats on an amazong, sexii, story!!
SLJ xx
I'm gonna rule the world... well, sign me up!! That was painfully H.O.T
congrats on an amazong, sexii, story!!
SLJ xx
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June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. It's sick, dark and aboslutely brilliant. Usually I don't like stories where Harry turns evil and/or abusive, but in this story I didn't care. It was great the way it was.
I wish that you would write more on it, cause I really enjoyed it. But I will most deffinetly read it more times.
I wish that you would write more on it, cause I really enjoyed it. But I will most deffinetly read it more times.
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April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was entertaining. It was confusing, it was weird but by god this story was fucking entertaining. I had a good laugh, it was freaking evil and you know what I liked it. Not even sorta liked it but genuinely like it. I usually don't read stories like these, in fact they usually turn me off but you know what...you're rocked and it certainly caught my attention from start to finish. Great freaking Awesome job. Loved it. Thanks for writing this story.
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April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please write an epiloge!
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March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's dark but it's pretty good. I admit I had my doubts, especially in the first chapter where at first glance it looked like a mostly just dark pervert Harry was going to try and take over the world with his dick. it developed better as time went on and Harry got progressively darker and the plot got more involved.
The only thing I would add or change would be to include Luna's decision to go to Harry and have him claim her. You detailed how all of the others were made, but not her. It's such a hefty decision to make, so seeing that experience which to most everyone else was painful and humiliating to begin with before their will was stripped, and have her yearn for it, want it and ask for it then be granted exactly what she wanted, how sexy that could be to find out how it was done and what she was thinking?
I liked this story, trust me if it hadn't captured my attention I wouldn't have read it through to the end. I look forward to seeing what else you may have posted.
The only thing I would add or change would be to include Luna's decision to go to Harry and have him claim her. You detailed how all of the others were made, but not her. It's such a hefty decision to make, so seeing that experience which to most everyone else was painful and humiliating to begin with before their will was stripped, and have her yearn for it, want it and ask for it then be granted exactly what she wanted, how sexy that could be to find out how it was done and what she was thinking?
I liked this story, trust me if it hadn't captured my attention I wouldn't have read it through to the end. I look forward to seeing what else you may have posted.